Forward

When I entered this world from my mother
A lead wall slammed behind my back.
The wall began to push me forward
Through my life, up the stairs of aging.
And when I entered my teens,
A rope hoisted me around my waist
Lifting me into the air, over a pit of fire.
Below my dangling feet, I saw my mother.
She lies on her back, on a thin sheet of metal
Baking in the heat
Only an arm’s reach away from me.
In a panic, I reach out and grab her hands.
I hold them there, trying to pull her up.
But she refuses to move
Instead she fights me,
Bites at me
Squirms and hisses.
I still hold on, crying, screaming.
Begging her to not let go.
She stops her struggle
Yet holds us in place.
Over the fire.
And we dangle there together,
As the rope begins to snap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 26, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Hi Shanda, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 25, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Shanda, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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