Balveen Cheema Poet Rhyme

Forty Days

Forty Days





                        Astronomers time track a cycle of forty days 

                       Observe prayer and fasts for sacred forty days 

                             The body and spirit purify in forty days

                           Our naming ceremony is on the fortieth day

                                The boy is naughty as he turns forty!





                                            8 words in all five lines

                                                January 23, 2016

                                                   Contest: Forty

                                               Sponsor: Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2016 at 11:39 PM again, thanks for the reply Balveen Cheema March 28, 2016 at 12:13 PM Thanks Linda!

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 11:22 PM Balveen, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :) Balveen Cheema February 1, 2016 at 3:26 AM Thanks Linda!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 28, 2016 at 2:06 AM Wonderful write Balveen ..Congrats on big win!! Balveen Cheema January 29, 2016 at 9:44 PM Many thanks Upma!

Paul Callus January 26, 2016 at 2:25 PM Serious and witty all in one, Balveen! Congrats on a lovely win! // paul Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 10:18 PM Thanks Paul!

Skat A January 26, 2016 at 12:20 PM BALVEEN, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT** Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 10:18 PM Thanks Skat!

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2016 at 9:38 AM Well expressed, congrats on your win. Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 11:38 AM Thanks Richard!

Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:35 AM Congratulations Balveen on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 9:12 AM Many thanks Hansteven! Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 8:41 AM Many thanks Hansteven!

Joyce Johnson January 25, 2016 at 9:37 PM Well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:19 AM Thanks Joyce!

Lin Lane January 25, 2016 at 8:57 PM Nicely done, Balveen...cute finishing line. Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:22 AM Thanks Lin! Love....

Jan Allison January 25, 2016 at 6:00 PM Great pen Balveen and I like the humour in the final line:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:20 AM Thanks Jan! Love!

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2016 at 3:58 PM hey, CONGRATS, my friend!! Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:21 AM Thanks Andrea! Love.....

Sandra Haight January 25, 2016 at 1:25 PM Nicely done, Balveen! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:23 AM Thanks Sandra! Love....

Constance La France January 25, 2016 at 8:49 AM Belveen, I like all your reasons why forty is meaningful, well done ~ Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:24 AM I appreciate your appreciation!Thanks Constance! Love

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 12:24 PM hey, I like how you did it. Kind of like me, focusing on the significance of that awesome number. Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:24 AM Thanks dear! Love....

Archana Garg January 24, 2016 at 2:40 AM Well defined poem. Good luck. Balveen Cheema January 26, 2016 at 6:25 AM Thanks Archna! Love....