Forsaken In Prison

I m p r i s o n e d.
   C o n f i n e d.
      D e t a i n e d.
         I n c a r c e r a t e d. 

Locked in a cell for too long...days of darkness and 
wearing orange. Was the accident really my fault? 
I was driving safely. It was raining and I swear she 
just jumped in front of my car without reservation. 
Now I suffer in a penitentiary holding onto all the 
guilt one woman can hold. Involuntary manslaughter 
conviction and my life is over. Five long years confined 
in a cage of remorse and loneliness. Is this fair? 
She died and that will always be on my conscience. 

F o r g i v e n e s s.
   A t o n e m e n t.
      M e r c y.
         L e n i e n c y.

I have begged for forgiveness for wrongs I have 
committed. My freedom regained, but I yet I still am in 
prison outside of the bars. No remission can be found 
as I lay at night on a cold cement floor in an old car garage 
not being used anymore. Absolution would be nice. 
I know I may have been wrong, but doesn’t everyone 
deserve to be exonerated? I need vindication in my soul if 
I wish to move on with my life. 

F o r l o r n.
   A b a n d o n e d. 
      N e g l e c t e d.
         I s o l a t e d. 


I have had more days of rejection than I can ever count. 
No matter the season I have been deserted and left 
friendless beyond comprehension. I needed love to 
survive and apparently surviving is not in my future. I crave 
the comfort of a good home and a warm bed to lay my 
head. I thirst for clean water and nourishing healthy food. 
But these things are not given and are not available for 
me to receive. One mistake one rainy night created a chain 
effect that has brought nothing but darkness in my days. 
I am sorry. Please forgive me for your death, young lady. 
Not a day goes by I don’t wish I could take it back. 
Accidents happen, and mine cost me my freedom. 

F O R S A K E N. 


Form F Contest
Broken Wings
January 25, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Calasibetta Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your win....
Martin Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:35 AM
Great free verse poem - emotional cautionary tale. Congratulations! :-)
Krampe Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Powerful poem, luloo- congrats on your win.
Nusker Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 2:59 AM
It's sad and it's scary. Powerful write, Laura. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 10:11 PM
A very sad and despondent write! Well done! Congrats, Luloo!
Poteet Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 8:31 PM
You picture despair and desolation very well in these three stanzas. Nice effect the quartets of single words between the verses. Congratulations, you aced this prompt for forsaken in free verse. Well-done
La France Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Laura, congratulations on your Second Place win in my Form F Contest, your poem is so powerful and full of emotion and desperation and sorrow ~
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