Forsaken

No one heard me when I cried
I was all alone with my tears,
    they chose not to weep for me

No one knew I was hurting
I was all alone with my pain,
    they chose not to feel for me

No one knew I was afraid
I was all alone with my fear,
    they chose not to rescue me

No one knew I felt angry
I was all alone with my rage,
    they chose not to feel fury for me

No one knew I was being violated
I was all alone with my abuser,
     they chose to look away from me

No one heard my quieted voice
I was all alone in that dreadful situation
    they chose not to hear my cry for help

I reached out, but I was all alone,
no one was there,
    just him.

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Date: 6/24/2022 8:47:00 AM
A most hurt being and voice after invasion of privacy for possible sexual molestation. Violators would choose a smart time for Molestation, entrenching in one a feeling of abandonment.
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Judy Reeves
Date: 6/24/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Chinedum for you comment.
Date: 6/23/2022 7:26:00 PM
WOW Judy. This poignantly expressed poem made me wish I could reach through the computer and rescue you from your father. I am so sorry this happened to you. May God hold you tenderly in the palm of His hand. Hugs to you!
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Judy Reeves
Date: 6/23/2022 10:55:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer for your comment. I will take a virtual hug. Family were aware and said or did nothing.
Date: 6/23/2022 7:01:00 PM
Each line spoke to various times in my past. Thank you for this! Beautifully written.
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Judy Reeves
Date: 6/23/2022 10:52:00 PM
Hi Ms Affection. Thank you for your comment. Sorry you have had bad things happen to you too.
Date: 3/14/2022 7:31:00 AM
Plague of our times, child abuse is rampant, yet parents and caretakers hold not trust of the child to confide
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Judy Reeves
Date: 3/16/2022 2:49:00 AM
Hiya. The abuser was my father. it tends to be within the family a lot of the time. Thank you for commenting on my poem.
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