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Form That Has Me Charmed - Minichu

Syllables constricting, Which takes quite some effort with a unique rhyme scheme, Restricting, Careful thinking, Childhood innocence, bizarre theme, Clicking, New form, Wonderful dream, Charm! Syllables constricting, Childhood innocence, bizarre theme, Charm! 10.10.2020 For Mohan Chutani's "Let's Minichu on Writing or Not Writing a Minichu" contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/4/2020 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. It was a fun read. I need to try this. Enjoy your win and day.................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/31/2020 6:20:00 AM

Nice Jo! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/31/2020 3:43:00 AM

Jo, congrats for your placement and giving me your lovely feedback on Minichu format. Best. Mohan.

John Watt

Date: 10/21/2020 9:35:00 AM

I like how you have incorporated his previous contests into this one, childhood innocence and bizarre. Clever! You make this flow nicely, Jo.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2020 12:55:00 PM

It truly is restricting but once you get it all together it's magical!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/10/2020 4:55:00 AM

A new form but I am not much in contests these days. Still you did a great composition. Blessings. ~~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/10/2020 4:09:00 AM

This is great... I haven't tried this but it looks so difficult. Love and prayers and blessings too... Gina