Forlorn Hope


              Forlorn and lost,
        I hang my head like a dying flower;
      scars on my soul are mossed,
        I drown in dregs that devour.
  My journey has left my life garden so ravaged,
  but, I must leave this forlorn that keeps me damaged;
     and hope must be salvaged.
  I will find my strength and power at any cost !

            Hope is like water,
        and though life is a struggle and journey;
      I am my mother's daughter,
        and will battle all those vines ferny.
  There will be twists and turns and days that taint and stain,
  but, against the winds I will break my forlorn chain;
    to find my way in the rain.
 And forlorn will be rinsed away with the hope water !

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April 13, 2021


Poetry/Rhyme/Forlorn Hope
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1346-851-13
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, This or That, Vol 2
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 05/13/2021

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Constance, what a beautiful picture of hope as flowing water refreshing, renewing, making clean, washing away grief. So well done. Great to see this on the winners list! Congratulations to you! Love and a hug!
La France Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Sam, thank you for the comment, and the compliment and congratulations, love _Constance
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on your great win Constance, you deserve it. This is by far and to be one of the greatest poems I've ever read
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Las, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, peace _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Superb write with wonderful use of metaphor and vivid imagery, Constance. Congrats on your win in my contest!
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Edward, thank you for the inspiration and the contest, appreciate, and the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 8:06 AM
A lovely write and a sure winner. I love it... Again you impress me so... God bless you always. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and the encouragement, God bless, and love _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 1:48 AM
I have always felt the rain has such a cleansing feeling not just physically but emotionally as well. This is beautiful Constance. I hope it is the top winner in a contest. Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment and the encouragement, appreciate, love _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Hello Constance, without hope we have nothing. There is always hope. Love, friendship. Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Hello Constance, your welcome my friend. love Darlene
La France Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Darlene, so true, thanks for the comment and visit, love _Constance
Hankins Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 9:53 AM
This is rich writing out of experience so many of us who write poetry have in common. Hope ignites the future reality.
La France Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Milt, thank you for the wonderful comment, appreciate, love _Constance
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