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NOT CONTEST BOUND I stood upon a rocky shoal, regret lingering across my mind Its fingers traced the blood-filled lines along my bare arm as if they were the brittle veins of leaves fallen from a tree I was not blind to fear or its impending threat of harm Its whispers felt like the breath of death, washing over me How brief the moment seemed to pass, between light and dark Shadows fluttered and were cast in ebony depth of night This was a foreshadowing tale of danger, imminent and stark A pale moon had risen, a silvered orb staring at me from high as a cyclops beast waiting to feast when the moment was right A scarecrow stood in fallow field, upon his arms were perched ravens whose brothers danced on his head, raucously calling Death rode upon an ill wind when suddenly they took flight Such was my fright when in the sky a pair of red eyes lurched I stared in disbelief, knowing I had no chance of forestalling Within the barren branches of each maudlin, leafless limb Regret stared at me from the forlorn eyes of Edgar Allen Poe I felt my knees begin to tremble, my eyes filled to the brim Frozen with terror, I was deprived of taking a life-giving breath A chill made me quiver, and I realized it had begun to snow How brisk was the Winter wind. The flock of crow took to the air after sending me a warning glance with fierce beady eyes An eclipse veiled the face of the moon, filling me with despair I heard the caws, and despite my flaws, denied Poe to take my soul From the waters edge I walked away from death on a rocky shoal

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Date: 11/26/2023 6:27:00 AM
This is very well written, Lin. Very descriptive which only intensifies the dark mood. Should do well, I would think.
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Date: 11/26/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Danny but it’s not for a contest.
Date: 11/25/2023 5:33:00 PM
and thus a shriek from the dark side awakens all...Loved this Lin, found myself rushing through the first reading followed by.....well, nicely written I won't try the lights out tonight.....
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Date: 11/26/2023 6:09:00 AM
You have me smiling, John. I know you’re braver then that. I hear them caw en mass and I shiver recalling what scripture says about them. Keep the lights on. thanks ;-)
Date: 11/25/2023 4:07:00 PM
EA Poe is one of my favourite poets and this poem did him justice, and what an incredible picture of him that is
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Date: 11/25/2023 5:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Clive. I’ve always admired his poetic skill and sorrowed that he died too young. Imagine what other fantastic tales he could’ve written.
Date: 11/25/2023 3:25:00 PM
a stunning and eerie poem, Lin. Your images grabbed my attention. I especially liked "A pale moon had risen, a silvered orb staring at me from high as a cyclops beast waiting to feast when the moment was right." Seriously, your images made me feel as if I was there experiencing the terror first hand. Well done, Lin. Hope you have a great weekend, hugs, Sara
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Date: 11/25/2023 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for feeling the fear through my words, Sara. It’s a great weekend so far and I wish the same for you.

Book: Shattered Sighs