Forlorn

More than a good poem. Disappointment dripping. Tears in an empty Comments box. Panagiota Romios 4/12/2019

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/14/2019 11:19:00 AM

I”m a new reader to your poetry and find I just love it! I decided to try a few Haiku because it DOES seem so much work to do the longer genre. However, I found out I’m not writing Haiku but Senryu (Haiku is about nature, Senryu about human foibles). Then the whole 5-7-5 thing is dispelled in that we are allowed 6-7-6 in English. The PS directory of genre is helpful for me. I started out using the rules, LOL. I think people would comment more if they knew how much we learn from each other!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/14/2019 7:26:00 PM

Welcome to thecSoup. I am a pinhead with any of the forms you mentioned, I was raised in western literature and the greats, so it's not my are if expertise. I wish you the best..I think I already put you om my Follow list see toy soon? Thank you, Panagiota