Forgotten Field of Forever

I stood in the field of the lost,
Called from my slumber,
I found myself in this forever field,
They walked in silence and serenity,
The wounded, the wearied and the troubled.

Snatched by the hands of time and clime,
They were taken out of sight by the night,
They had walked the last mile of their sojourn,
The midnight train had chauffeured them to the beyond,
To a sanctuary of solace and solitude.

I wondered why they had come to this field,
Did they come to seek the unwritten?
Did they come to find answers to their troubled existence?
Have they come to fellowship?
The field looked fallow and faceless.

A wind blew and I was taken away,
It was a vivid vision,
One of the deepest I had seen,
One that left me amazed and awed,
Life has segments where nothing sounds when it falls.


April 17, 2024.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May 1, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Wonderful take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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May 1, 2024 at 1:50 PM
Thank you, Silent One. It's an honour.
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April 25, 2024 at 12:27 PM
Belated Congrats on POTD Thompson! Love the Title, love the poem! Debx
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April 27, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Thank you, Deb X. It's an honour.
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April 22, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Thompson, a worthy POTD! Your captured imagery and thought is stunning. Congrats! …catching up after busy week!
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April 22, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Thank you, Kim. It's an honour.
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April 21, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Congrats on this as POTD. I read a couple of times, a feeling of vacancy came to me both times. It was what I wanted to feel through the arch of your words.
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April 22, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Roger. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 6:55 PM
A ' forgotten field. ' That image curls around my heart. So sad. Your thoughts hold many emotions. Congratulations Thompson, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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April 20, 2024 at 1:36 AM
Thank you, Brandy. It's an honour.
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April 19, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, Thompson! Enjoy your special day of recognition!
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April 19, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, Sotto Poet. It's an honour.
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April 19, 2024 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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April 19, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Thank you, Paula. It's an honour.
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April 19, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Thompson! Enjoy your special day of recognition! A poet in Texas, Bill
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April 19, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Thank you, Bill. It's an honour.
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April 19, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Poem left me with a feeling of a field of spiritual desolation. It travels aloft like the wind.
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April 19, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Hilda. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 5:04 AM
A journey on the' midnight train to the beyond', Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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April 19, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Thompson, well penned, congratulations on POTD.
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April 19, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Tania. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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April 19, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Jeanette. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 3:04 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Thompson :) - hugs
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April 19, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Congrats Thompson, Dear Thompson, I loved how the questions you posed about their purpose in that field echoed in my mind, provoking introspection. Your words left me both amazed and humbled, showing life's enigmatic nature and the silent struggles we all endure. Congrats again! - Blessings, Daniel
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April 19, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 12:37 AM
A well composed verse Thompson, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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April 19, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Tom. I'm honoured.
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April 19, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Congratulations on winning potd!
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April 19, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Thank you, Karen. I'm honoured.
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