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You're a naive, dyed-in-the-wool dreamer, following the erratic paths of hope; blind to the route fate's chosen for your soul. Memories are prisms focused on the past; observing shadows that cannot be changed, while yesterday's failed dreams levy their toll. You have shared the innate beauty of love, and the fantasy of dreamy places; freeing your spirit to soar like the birds. But the edge of betrayal cuts like glass; your wounded heart, bleeding tears of regret, till anger dictates love's departing words. From birth to the finality of death, Human emotions are tethered to love; even those which question its existence. There is a private place deep in your heart filled with forgotten, fragmented feelings where dreams dwell, fueled by hope's persistence.

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Date: 6/30/2021 9:20:00 AM
Exquisite stanzas, Emile, summed up in the last one with "a magical place somewhere in your heart." I love this line.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/30/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Milt, your words are a ray of sunshine on an otherwise dismal day my friend, Emile.

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