Forgotten Coats

I sink lower in the cupboard
of the front hall closet 
beneath the stairs,
behind a row of forgotten coats
that hang quietly before me. 
They mock my cowardice
as I crouch beneath their silent judgement...
I'm alone in the shadows created by a
jaundiced yellow bulb that barely burns 
brighter than the flame on a candle.

I hug my knees as I sit and wallow in regret for my mistakes;
but all I really want to do is stand up 
and tear down every last coat, one-by-one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Belated congratulations to you on your win in Brian's "Four To Fourteen" contest Katie. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 12:30 AM
Very nice and super creative, I really enjoyed this poem. Congrats on your well deserved win.........S. Ronthorpe
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. This is a fascinating write.
Bunton Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Congratulations, heart felt
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 2:57 PM
What an image and brings back so many memories too [I bet for lots of folks] Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 8:47 AM
congrats Katie on a wonderful first place win for this brilliant beauty luv..
Quigley Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 8:46 AM
I think everyone at one time or another has felt this need to escape and the desire to tear down that around us. But, hopefully, more positive acts prevail. Nice write. Congrats Katie
Arno Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 6:53 AM
Super job Katie and congratulations on your winning entry. Jon
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February 3, 2012 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations Katie x
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February 3, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Congrats to you for your first place win!! Blessings, Rhonda:)
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