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submerged pebbles my forgotten dreams waiting for the sea to wash them ashore

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/14/2017 8:26:00 PM

Your melancholy is absolutely beautiful Paul. I truly enjoyed this little gem this evening! Excellent!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/15/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, and for visiting my humble parlour, Susan. Glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 10/11/2017 8:53:00 AM

Wow. Nice piece. The pebbles will run down with the sea to the shore and restored back your happiness. Keep it up.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/11/2017 2:27:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Derek. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/8/2017 1:48:00 PM

OH, Paul....you are poet extraordinaire! What a meaningful write. I wish I could pick them up for you...and let you live them. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/9/2017 3:53:00 PM

You give me wings, dear Eileen:) Thank you for your encouragement and support! Will be stopping by to see what you have posted of late. Hugs // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/4/2017 1:59:00 PM

So beautifully penned and artfully crafted- a powerful message that is well-articulated with a few words and awesome imagery! Love this piece! Hugs. Your friend, Pandita.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 3:09:00 PM

Thank you for a delightful visit and meaningful feedback, Pandita. Hugs to a lovely friend:) Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 10/4/2017 10:13:00 AM

Tranquail poem well done hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 3:05:00 PM

Glad you found it to your liking, Eve. Peace & Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2017 8:05:00 AM

I enjoyed this peaceful poetic piece PAUL.:0)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 3:04:00 PM

Always a pleasure to have you stopping by, Richard:) Thanks & Regards // paul

Ricky Muse

Date: 10/2/2017 6:31:00 PM

Image is a great tool for a poet. Thanks for sharing.................peace!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Richard; your visit is appreciated. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 9/29/2017 3:28:00 PM

Wonderful write Paul..best wishes

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 3:01:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Joseph. Best regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/28/2017 8:57:00 PM

My friend, you sea of dreams must have waves of poetic words in its high tides! And a most beautiful beach upon which all is cast!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 3:00:00 PM

You encourage by your lovely comments, Robert. Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/28/2017 3:04:00 AM

I love the imagery of your words as the sea and pebbles are mesmerizing to me. I choose to feel the hopeful meaning in that one is standing on the shore with one's 'dreams' finding their way on a wave...to you on dry land:) A beautiful reflective write Paul:) a fave

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 2:59:00 PM

Your feedback is lovely and insightful, as always, Lynn; thank you! (Been busy...trying to catch up...) Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2017 11:03:00 PM

I love the images your words conjure in my mind Paul. Being the optimist that I am I'll be waiting for those forgotten dreams to surface, take heart....Maria xx

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2017 2:55:00 PM

Thank you, Maria. Like you, I also try to look on the positive side...never too old to make dreams come true:) Regards // paul