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Forgiving Hurt

I was told that a friend cherished, talked about me,
said-  I was not hearing her when she spoke;
        I was so angry,
          for I am a listener !
A true friend to those who I let enter my world,
for this journey has made me very careful;
I did not say anything to her but distanced myself,
then, weeks, weeks later I realize I was hurt, not angry.
(and I missed her and our conversations on every subject)
      Does this mistake have to end friends ?
        Perhaps, I can ask why over coffee?
"To err is human; to forgive divine . . . . "(Alexander Pope)

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February 4, 2020


Poetry/Verse/Forgiving Hurt
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1223-059-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for Famous Poetic Lines 2
sponsor, Silent One

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lindley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Love this great poem.. You my friend always give us your best and of your great poetic heart! Congratulations on your win. God bless..
La France Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Robert, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 3:17 PM
I believe in forgiveness but sometimes we must part friends, to keep on a positive path. Wonderfully expressed Constance. Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
La France Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Connie, thanks for the congratulations and the comment, sadly I did have to part with this friend as I found out she was still talking behind my back, I will say nothing but just distance myself _Constance
Adams Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 11:49 AM
I like where you went with this one Constance... wonderful penning... congrats on your win... hugs
La France Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Sandra, thanks for the congrats and the compliment _Constance
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 8:39 AM
- A great and a little sad poem Constance, congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:21 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations, yes it is a sad poem _Constance
One Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 6:35 AM
WE always confuse anger with hurt and vice versa.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
La France Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Silent, thanks for the contest and for my placement, I kept asking myself what was I feeling and what I initially thought was anger was incredible hurt _Constance
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