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Forgiveness

You say why I cannot leave
that far from darkened days.
I drank silence for so long.

Black spiders seek my mind.
I need a light to learn the purpose 
of forgiving me, because I wish
To enjoy each hour while 
I walk these days.

I do not wish to listen
Devil obscure words. The sky is not black,
it’s blue,
but I feel it’s black seen through too much distance. 
We only earned one life. 
& I hope crystal winds rush in to erase
that someday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/3/2017 5:30:00 AM
The middle stanza is attractive ... as such the whole poem is very good ... enjoyed reading ...
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Eduardo Escalante
Date: 6/3/2017 5:34:00 AM
Thanks!!!

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