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Forgiveness

In your eyes I see anger reign, you splutter words like acid rain. Sane sense turns to ash in my view, as I discover myself new I don’t drag you in pit of hate, don’t blaze in revenge fire in spate. The wrath in my soul you can’t spew, as I discover myself new. I drown you in forgiveness flow, shower of pity wets you slow. You rise from ash of remorse true, as I discover myself new. I pray to God, give strength of mind, to wrongdoers I can be kind. Show my soul right course to pursue, as I discover myself new.

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Date: 3/21/2025 5:10:00 PM
Congrats, Subimal! Love that you drown this one in forgiveness flow!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/21/2025 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Yes, but it's not easy
Date: 3/21/2025 11:03:00 AM
Love the message! The title drew me in and the poem doesn’t disappoint! Congratulations on your win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/21/2025 12:58:00 PM
Thank you for your read and for the wonderful comments.
Date: 3/21/2025 8:34:00 AM
Excellent, congratulations
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/21/2025 12:58:00 PM
Thank you for your read and comment.
Date: 3/21/2025 7:11:00 AM
Very nicely penned Subimal, Congrats on your win
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/21/2025 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, for the placement and comment.

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