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Forgiveness (Word Morph)

Crippling fear When I won't hear A word could heal My endless hell Removing smear I would swear A heart could swell Beyond its shell

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Date: 10/2/2009 4:40:00 PM

So much depth in this concise poem. Nice word evolution. The emotion comes through the lines. Keep on writing! Have a good weekend. Karen

Sara Lokken

Date: 3/10/2009 3:54:00 PM

Sometimes forgiveness is excrutiating. You have captured that in this work. Very raw and visceral. Best wishes, Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2009 9:34:00 AM

Forgiveness is one of the greatest things we have to offer others, and you convey your feelings well in this thoughtful poem. Truly moving! Love, Carolyn

Arany P.

Date: 3/9/2009 9:30:00 AM

i totally understand what you mean about undoing the attitude sometimes we got to have the freedom to write what we want!! & i think you can take it upon yourself to get there i have! thats why i started writing happy stuff and not sad poems cause that not me!! my friends like it when i write sad writes they understand those better! Yoni you are welcome to express your opinions as you wish!! i have written that in my poem too! and thank you for sharing your thoughts, always appreciated! ~ Arany

Arany P.

Date: 3/9/2009 2:19:00 AM

nicely done!! well expressed ~ Arany

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/8/2009 8:53:00 PM

Love this poem Yoni. Good write.

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/8/2009 7:52:00 PM

Yoni an excellent job on this - God Bless, MJ