Forgiveness (The True Test of Love)

I reckon the thing I try to say
I say with all my heart
After all the fun of being high
Your life will fall apart

Life to me is like a river
One with many falls
And I have rode the rapids
Living for the call

Don’t know how it happened
Or if I ever will
But somewhere deep inside 
I changed how I feel

I guess my heart was so broke
Nothing left to break
I was left all alone in a cell
Nothing left to take

About truly understanding love
Believe these words I say
You will truly learn to treasure it
When love’s taken away

I don’t mean when love is lost
We all have broken hearts
Bleeding red down the page
Not even knowing where to start

When you still love each other
One gets taken away
Through the fears, tears and years
The other will go astray

Forgiveness is the test of love
It is the test of time
Wife and I withstood the test
We are doing fine

Know the trials hurt real bad
Shadows filled my soul
As years I spent full of hate
Living in a hole

When they finally set me free
Our eyes came together
We each knew there was no test
Love could not weather

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When you love with all you are
All you are is who you love.
Never jeopardize that or let it go.
Everything but that love is just 
another illusion. MJ

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/3/2009 7:30:00 AM
very nice poem, i have experience a broken heart, and until i came to grips and forgive the other person i was istantly set free. What happens in most cases, if we don't for give we end up hurting ourselves, and the person sometimes is not aware we have something against them, they are going about their business enjoying their life, when we are heavy laden with anger and unforgiveness. great poem. lots to be said, but keep them coming. Abe
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Date: 6/7/2009 1:34:00 PM
When you love someone enough, forgivness comes easy. The thing is, forgivness is for the forgiver's benefit alone and does very little for the forgivee. But damn, man! You shoot straight from the heart and are right on target. Loved the read and will be watching for more. Thanks <><
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Date: 5/6/2009 4:46:00 PM
Many walk on this very path everyday, some realize true love, and some never will....you my dear friend had Jesus Christ guiding your path.....He brought you home....always, Christy
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:22:00 PM
Oh my heart be still. I feel the exact same way concerning your author's note at the end. Nothing matters more, nothing. You are sharing some amazing work Michael. Almost feeling like some of this is part of a higher power. Well, it is, within you. It all is, either way. Just so beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/6/2009 1:54:00 PM
Awesome poetry brother...forgiveness makes the load lighter..freeing the mind to do awesome works.
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Date: 5/6/2009 1:23:00 PM
How true that "Forgiveness is the test of love." When all is said and done, I believe forgiveness is the one thing that separates true love from passing fancy. Much wisdom throughout, MJ, especially in that last verse! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:55:00 PM
wow....beautiful poetry and a great story. thank you and will comment more later but...... enjoy your day and thank you for your comments.
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:01:00 PM
Hi Michael Your poetry is living proof that love prevails. What a inspiration you and your wife are to us all. Truly enjoyed Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:40:00 AM
With each poem, Michael, you inspire people to make more of their own lives....another from the heart poem from you! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:02:00 AM
Michael, another great write ... a tale of pure compassion ... it teaches how to get along ... unselfed and in faith ... congratulations with each success of life ... bravo for each cleansing write ... you are full of inspiration.
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