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Forgive Me Ma

As I recall those lonely childhood days My heart weeps for myself drenched in tears How I yearned mama for a gentle hug from you A soft caress and a kiss to make me glow Engrossed as you were tending to my dear brother And here I deduced you never did bother The scars grew each year And estranged I felt from your care But now seeing you strain As you beckon me near My heart cries in earnest struggle And yearns to snuggle Forgive me ma for I have erred Being blind to your loving words To your implicit care Being blind to the glistening tears That uttered silent prayers Being blind to the anxious queries Masked with concern Blinded I was and you I blamed I beg your forgiveness. @ Nadiya (19 Feb '15) Placed 9th on 21 Feb 2015 in the contest 'Forgiveness' by Rob Carmack.

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Date: 5/9/2015 2:28:00 PM
A touching write... Well done!
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:37:00 PM
The evolution of the heart acknowledged before we depart. Sincerest love deep down inside where forgiveness can finally abide. Peace. :) BTY, I love your name poesy relish.
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Robert.. its just my pen name and one which i myself like :)
Date: 3/1/2015 12:30:00 PM
My dear...what a wonderful write. How amazing. Sometimes our own perceptions blind us to reality. I loved this write, Nad. Bless you, Sweetie.
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:50:00 PM
Thank you dear Eileen... very glad that you liked my write... lov n hugs, nad
Date: 2/25/2015 9:42:00 PM
Humility is beauty, as this poem is beautiful!
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Arthur..
Date: 2/25/2015 10:18:00 AM
Absolutely loved this one -- sweet is the forgiveness -- both in the asking and giving . . . a great example of love in action. 7, fav
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thank you very much David... pleased that you like my pen... appreciate your lovely words.. nad
Date: 2/24/2015 9:39:00 AM
This is beautiful and touching, Nadiya. So many things we don't see clearly until we grow older, though sometimes it could be too late to say sorry! #7 congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul.always happy to see your comments on my poems.. nad
Date: 2/22/2015 5:43:00 PM
Nad, your poem is so emotional and oh how I know these feelings, congratulations on your win and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:28:00 AM
Thank you for your continued support friend.. hugs,nad!
Date: 2/22/2015 12:41:00 PM
such an emotional write Nadiya - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:29:00 AM
Thank you dear Jan... lov n hugs,nad
Date: 2/22/2015 12:17:00 PM
A wonderful heart felt poem! Sometimes it's not until we mature and those that matter most are gone! Love can be very misunderstood at times! A 7+++ all the way dear Nad! Hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:30:00 AM
exactly Jack... Thank you for the high rating :), hugs,nad
Date: 2/22/2015 11:27:00 AM
heartfelt write!.. huge congrats, dear poesy!
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Nette.. nad!
Date: 2/22/2015 9:44:00 AM
The blinded eyes of youth... opened with maturity. Wonderful poem... heartfelt words !! Congrats on your winning placement !!
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Debra for your visit and comment on my poem... lov n hugs, nad
Date: 2/22/2015 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations Nad on win.Love>>>Your friend
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:29:00 AM
Thank you dear friend :) :)
Date: 2/21/2015 10:56:00 PM
Heartfelt and heartrending. Beautiful and sad poem. Great form and flow. congratulations, Nad. :D Kim
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim
Date: 2/21/2015 10:27:00 PM
Poesy, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/21/2015 10:53:00 PM
Thank you skat :)
Date: 2/21/2015 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations Poesy......Luv LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:59:00 PM
Thank you dear Linda.. nad!
Date: 2/21/2015 7:25:00 PM
Such an emotional poem that pleads for forgiveness in such a very personal way. From the heart and so well composed, Nad. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:58:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra... hugs..
Date: 2/21/2015 2:18:00 PM
Poesy, congrats and thanks for writing for the contest.
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thank you Rob for the contest
Date: 2/20/2015 7:37:00 PM
Hits home and hits hard...love it
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Date: 2/21/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Anthony :) :)
Date: 2/20/2015 10:39:00 AM
So full of emotion. Well done Poesy. Hugs Janet
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Janet...
Date: 2/20/2015 5:41:00 AM
The magnitude of one's heart is measured also by the way it asks forgiveness! A tremendous poem that reaches the depths of our soul with grace and tenderness! A seven for certain, dear Nad!
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Dem... appreciate your lovely words... its always encouraging ... nad!
Date: 2/20/2015 12:42:00 AM
a lovely and emotive poem on the desire for forgiveness. Very well done!
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Date: 2/20/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea... its a pleasure to see your lovely face smiling at my poems...;).. nad
Date: 2/19/2015 5:06:00 PM
A really beautiful piece Nad....she has forgiven you all along....hugs Tim
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Tim... appreciate your comment on my poem... lov nad
Date: 2/19/2015 1:32:00 PM
Hey Poesy, so deep and filled with longing. And how wonderful - that you are blind no more. A beautifully written poem. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Neva
Date: 2/19/2015 12:30:00 PM
Wonderful Nad. A winner's poem. Love
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Poesy Relish
Date: 2/19/2015 9:07:00 PM
Thank you dear friend

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