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Forget-Me-Nots

Leave me now love, if you would not grow old. Memory will keep your beauty on hold For autumn afternoons when leaves turn gold And on wintry eves when the days are cold. Years will drift by like clouds upon the wind, Painting the dappled landscape of my mind With visions of impressionistic hue Of love I left behind when I was new. A view from afar is never so dear As the heartfelt warmth of one who is near. I’d rather share the seasons as they pass Then scan them through memory’s looking glass.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/17/2019 5:26:00 PM
Nice splice of delightfulness!
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Date: 8/12/2019 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful!your poetic style reminds me of many famous poets who used nature to show their emotions.well done!
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Date: 8/10/2019 5:36:00 AM
Romantic in one way. Enjoyed reading. Sara
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Date: 7/28/2019 1:37:00 PM
"memory's looking glass". Truly worth every moment of thought... Lovely, sentimental piece. I enjoyed every word. Ann
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David Drowley
Date: 7/29/2019 2:13:00 PM
"Thank you Ann. I appreciate your encouragement! David"
Date: 11/21/2018 5:35:00 PM
This is beautiful. You are a great writer :)
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Date: 7/16/2018 2:44:00 AM
- The fall is coming to all ... but it will be a new spring ... let the love live ... grow old together - A touching poem, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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