Forever's Loving Rose

T’would seem the edge of beauty unexposed
Relies upon the images it stirs
More so than that, forever’s loving rose
Though faded knows she was the one he chose

For memory, though dark, still holds its flame
Dim light to weave its way through grayish stones
Cold winds that whisper long forgotten names
As distant bells lament their silenced tones

Thus, does she speak in dandelion tongue
Her mocking beauty rivaling the sun
For love it seems remains forever young
Its whispers of forever - ever sung

For beauty is the guise of lust’s demise
Weeping beneath its shadowy grey skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Willason Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:35 PM
Deep stuff here my friend, heavy with wisdom wrapped up in skillfully constructed poetry. Couldn't ask for more...keep em coming !
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Tor Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Love your message in this write of yours John on this loving Rose. Your story line is wonderful and creative. Thoughtful metaphors that tell a heartfelt story. As always John exceptional write you have created...Have a nice day...
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