Mark Woods Poet Rhyme

Forever Yours

I thought no one would ever possess me
No matter how hard that they tried
But you gave it a go, where no one succeeded
The reason you did, I’ll never know why.

The winds blow me forever towards you
As if you’re the one, I’m having to find
Maybe the answer to all of my problems
Our freeness is superbly entwined.

I think from the moment I saw you
Maybe it was the depth of your smile
Somehow a kindred, someone I wanted
Now life was completely worthwhile.

I’m stronger when ever I’m near you
But I melt in the gaze of your eyes
Magic and motion and endless devotion
Our love is like an endless surprise.

I can see us through to our sunset
Holding hands in the warmth of our flame
Blessing each other, as we’re better together
Always connected, as one and the same.



** Whoop Whoop. My first ever proper love poem!

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Funom Makama January 14, 2016 at 11:27 AM #7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Skat A January 7, 2016 at 6:29 PM MARK, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT** Mark Woods January 8, 2016 at 12:22 AM Thank you SKAT, a little out of my comfort zone, but I hope I can do it again. : )

Stacey Brown January 7, 2016 at 6:12 AM Definitely an awesome first! Love is surely where its at! blessings, Stacey Mark Woods January 8, 2016 at 12:23 AM Thank you Stacey, yep love is an awesome place to be.

Nette Onclaud January 5, 2016 at 11:53 AM awhhh, i am mesmerized, mark... how divine is this love poem..huggs Mark Woods January 5, 2016 at 12:09 PM Thank you Nette. I'll keep reading you more romantic, image laden writers. I hope a wee bit of your magic will rub off.

White Sage January 5, 2016 at 8:45 AM excellent write, the words said it all well...nice write Mark White Sage January 5, 2016 at 3:15 PM lol...you'd get them a finger on there face Mark Woods January 5, 2016 at 12:16 PM Cheers white sage, I don't think I'll be schooling teenagers on how to write a poem to pick up the hottest girl at school quite yet though. ; )

Eileen Manassian January 5, 2016 at 8:42 AM Well what do you know! You CAN write romantic poems. The stanza before the last is my favorite one. Great job. Mark Woods January 5, 2016 at 11:42 AM lol I don't think that breaks me into the echelon of love specialists quite yet, more Meatloaf than Tom Jones but it's a start.

Afolabi Muideen January 5, 2016 at 4:28 AM Wow! This is immensely beautiful, you really did a great job. Phenomenal............A.M. Mark Woods January 5, 2016 at 11:26 AM Afolabi somehow I don't think I will ever be accused of being one of the great romantics! Thank you for your kind comments,

Constance La France January 5, 2016 at 3:39 AM Mark, magical, beautiful with endless love, well done for a first love poem, truly lovely ~ Mark Woods January 5, 2016 at 11:21 AM Thank you BW, I know I've a long ways to go yet, but a first is a first.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 5, 2016 at 3:01 AM Hey Mark really this is your first :P??? It seems it is in you already, :D I love the poem I can relate to it, James often tell me that he melted when he saw my smile, weeee! I love best your 2nd to the last stanza! flow and rhyme and wow! I wish I can rhyme a sgood as you! Have a hAppy Day!~Smiles, Olive Eloisa =`) Mark Woods January 5, 2016 at 3:23 AM Love isn't my specialty subject. I can feel it, see it, read it, but can't seem to write about it...Lol my wife says when it came to courting if I was any slower I would have been glacial. Which is probably right I was absolutely hopeless!!

Dalia Shahein January 4, 2016 at 7:49 PM Wow my friend this is very touchy and deep full of passion and hunger for love , love is the greatest gift and it's the most powerful thing in the whole universe....u nailed it in this one I salute u .....FAV...hugs / / :) dalia Mark Woods January 4, 2016 at 10:19 PM I was considering posting it as a lyric, the 3rd verse would make a nice chorus. Maybe I'm wrong but I might just get the guitar out and see what comes of it...Thankyou so much for your kind words.