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Forever Yours

Forever Yours Confused, I weep for loss because my heart Does pine and long for a new day to dawn. When I shall see, quite well, your smile. My love is yours. Forgive, me please, if I perchance offend. Sought I to cause thee harm? I say,” No way!” Your smile and songs never will I forget. I miss you, so. My friend, look back, passing folly whispers. Flowers never knew such vibrant beauty. Upon the grass, happy butterflies raced. I beg, “Come back.” We ran against the wind, as free as birds. Look there, and dream of child like love we gave. The day we saved seashells, my heart took flight. Forever yours. My love for you shall not find end, this day. Nor shall I see love wane at all; I’ll shout. Forgive, forgive; just take my hand, again. Together, win. Poetic Form: Free Verse - Troche troche dactyl troche troche x3 +Dactyl troche

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Date: 9/18/2010 6:33:00 PM
A very moving, bittersweet poem, Dane Ann. Wonderful free verse. Love, Carrie And many thanks for my placement in your contest...I was just told the results had been posted! Thank you so much!
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Date: 9/18/2010 10:10:00 AM
Well done and said! Enjoyed the love you express to the meaning of what is yours,..p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:04:00 AM
Strong meaningful write...enjoyed...Michael
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