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Forever Within

I watched the rain Pouring forever, Down, It seemed. Later, the Sun, The moon and stars Still – silently glowing, Forever it seemed. My body occupied their space, Evolving thoughts traveled elsewhere Trying to connect together Brilliantly glowing alone – apart. I watched what was there Trying to understand a connection Senseless frigid thoughts of oddity Fitting inside was not possible, again Always outside – where it isn’t cramped Enough room to feel the stillness - usually. I had no face. Timid. I Was indescribably blending in with whiteness Erased by the superficial nothingness of time and space Where people resided with their clothes of jewels, gold and furs. Naked and exposed I lived amongst the forgotten few by the many Clad with my pure innocent unrefined rags of thoughts, ideas and brittle crumbs Leftovers for the “fairy tales of once upon a time” … the soulful ones Definable only by the inside of myself from within myself. Separated by inevitability, not by choice, maybe but still outside. I remain condemned by who I am To live within Inhaling the warmth solitude of self-expression Forever within. © Charles H Keys, 2012. All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/31/2012 10:26:00 AM
I rejoyed reading your work today. Thanks for sharing and thanks for reading my work.
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Date: 3/30/2012 1:29:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for posting
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Date: 3/30/2012 11:16:00 AM
Where did this week go I wonder again. I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Chuck. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2012 11:00:00 AM
Wow very US ;) I can see why you like my poetry..we are in the same flock if not birds of a feather..the only constructive question I have to ask is on form/layout ..why? capitalize the first word of every line? I know in the long past lots of poets did this..I do not do this because I do not consider than avalid reason ;) something [in life or your writing FOR a reason] Light & Love
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Chuck Keys
Date: 3/30/2012 11:47:00 AM
every work to me is not related to any others - they are all different - form, format, capitalization, punctuation etc. or not are relative to my thought process at the time of creation. i never know how it will look until i have completed it - does that make sense. my only consistency is i like variation, non restraint, aka freedom of thought. thanks for the comments.
Date: 3/30/2012 7:33:00 AM
This is very interesting, and I see your "trip" was also quite different and not the expected!! Great writing! nope, no waking up on a warm beach for ME. I sure wish it could be so!! Luv, Andrea
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Chuck Keys
Date: 3/30/2012 7:40:00 AM
you know, i think you are a great writer! i enjoy your thoughts and how well you make your point. thank you, chuck