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Forever Was a Lie That You Told To Pass the Time

We were young, the sparkle still in our eyes. You gave me your love, and I gave you mine. But the love you gave me was full of lies. I had given you my heart, and you still hold the key, but you took yours away from me. When we were together my heart became whole, But now you're gone and I feel like I'm missing Part of my soul. I'm still in love with you, But you can't even see me. You live your life, And I live mine, But something doesn't feel right. I feel empty I feel lost I feel like I have only half a heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/22/2016 11:42:00 PM
KATIE, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:26:00 PM
Katie, awesome win... :) SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:01:00 AM
Katie, congratulations on winning in the Free Verse Extravaganza contest! -Hans :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:15:00 AM
Wonderful poetry here Katie.. congrats on much deserved win.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:36:00 PM
Yes!!! I have felt the same way more than one time in my life, but somehow the heart keeps beating and with every beat it gets stronger. Many congrats on your win with this very tender free verse, Katie.
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:22:00 PM
Katie, congrats on your placement in the contest!! Welcome to Poetry Soup lady! You will love it here...:)-*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:15:00 PM
Katie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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