Forever the Orphan At Heart

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looking for wisdom where it could be found a vulnerability all too endearing subtle yet barely beneath the surface the abandoned child all grown up AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on October 28, 2020

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Sierra Chen

Date: 11/19/2020 2:06:00 PM

Well done

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/29/2020 5:38:00 PM

Powerful, full of intense feeling.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2020 12:18:00 AM

Thanks, much appreciated ~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2020 11:32:00 AM

Heart wrenching, Line and so sad. I think many will relate to your words. Thank you for sharing these deeply felt emotions. Sending you blessings of comfort and a hug.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2020 12:25:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sam. Much appreciated ~

Silent One

Date: 10/29/2020 11:06:00 AM

Heartbreaking, I have done a lot of work with orphans... Its very rewarding..

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2020 12:25:00 PM

thank you so much, SO ~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2020 4:37:00 AM

So sad... touches the very soul with it's grief .... such a sad, yet beautiful flow, expressing a painful piece of the heart. Lovely writing. God bless you

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2020 9:14:00 AM

Thanks, Gina. Much appreciated ~