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~ I love thee with a love that shall not die ~       

             till the sun grows cold and the stars grow old ~

                                                  ~ William Shakespeare ~

                                                                                                                                                                  

 

 

We are but mortals with uncertain destiny at the mercy of time and of fates that be but dearest, I'll remain forever true to thee For tis you I shall love, I avowal faithfully I shall hold you close unto my soft breast press my warm lips to thine at your behest croon thee to slumber when in need of rest bathe you in the sea's waves as they crest Though death may blazon to me at night shackled, we shall be in chains held tight n 'ere shall I be enticed far from thy sight nay, no grave ever be our dividing blight No reaper's scythe shall keep you from me from this heart of mine thy shan't be free as rooted fast in Earth's richest soil, a tree ere our hearts be entwined for all eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/30/2015 7:04:00 PM
Very nice...
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, John.
Date: 11/30/2015 10:25:00 AM
WOW! I love this so much :) SO romantic and passionate and emotional..well written! 7 :)-lu *smiles*
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2015 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your kindness and your rating.
Date: 11/30/2015 9:13:00 AM
Coming back to make sure I gave you a 7. :-) Alexis
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2015 11:58:00 AM
oh.. thanks!
Date: 11/30/2015 9:11:00 AM
Lin, you have penned a beautiful and romantic piece. I enjoyed the form as well. I also loved the Shakespearean style that you wrote in. Great job! A for sure "seven". :-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2015 11:58:00 AM
Hi, Alexis....many many thanks for your sweet comments.

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