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Forever Loving You

Sounds of a great mountain roar trembling echoes a shaking voice, flooding down the face a river of tears inside each drop, treasured sparkling crystals pearl jewels weep. Brings new life as joy sweetly blushing desires your beauty , Crowned queen of the flies bouquet colors, a butterfly dances floats upon a sun lighting rays, touching inside with warm wings sweeping an angel. Sweet gently skipping desire hot pulse beats star lighting passion , glows behind the jewels, baby you shine beautifully bright warm when the thunder roars , beast of reality natures lion. Loves arrow strikes deeply blushing red under a pink moon , sweetly embracing together kissing forever spirit of the night always uniting under your love, when our dream becomes true into eternity hand in hand one masterpiece walking to paradise adoring the picture within you.

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Date: 11/6/2014 9:05:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic Liam! The imagery is amazing! :) love it! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/6/2014 9:13:00 PM
thank you dorian your so sweet wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 8/27/2014 7:50:00 AM
Liam, this is truly exquisite with amazing imagery! Just a beautiful write - my kind of poetry! Thank you for sharing this gem! Pandita
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:09:00 AM
- Liam, without love there would have been no meaning in life or our dreams - Beautiful poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 2:17:00 PM
And forever is a long long time...Liam, beautiful and romantic as ever. If you believe in forever...I'm proud of you! Not many do these days. Hugs...Lovely to be a queen.
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Date: 8/19/2014 7:09:00 AM
Oh a beautiful walk in paradise, hot pulse beats starlight passion... sweet Liam. :) I enjoyed this lovely poem my friend ;)
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