Forever Loving You

Sounds of a great mountain roar
trembling echoes 
a shaking voice,
flooding down the face
a river of tears 
inside each drop, 
treasured sparkling crystals
pearl jewels weep.

Brings new life 
as joy sweetly blushing 
desires your beauty ,
Crowned queen of the flies bouquet colors,
a butterfly dances 
floats upon a sun lighting rays,
touching inside with warm wings 
sweeping an angel.

Sweet gently skipping desire 
hot pulse beats star lighting passion ,
glows behind the jewels,
baby you shine beautifully bright 
warm when the thunder roars ,
beast of reality natures lion.

Loves arrow strikes 
deeply blushing red
under a pink moon ,
sweetly embracing together 
kissing forever spirit of the night
always uniting under your love,
when our dream becomes true
into eternity hand in hand 
one masterpiece 
walking to paradise 
adoring the picture within you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 9:05 PM
Very beautiful and romantic Liam! The imagery is amazing! :) love it! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 9:13 PM
thank you dorian your so sweet wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Liam, this is truly exquisite with amazing imagery! Just a beautiful write - my kind of poetry! Thank you for sharing this gem! Pandita
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:09 AM
- Liam, without love there would have been no meaning in life or our dreams - Beautiful poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 2:17 PM
And forever is a long long time...Liam, beautiful and romantic as ever. If you believe in forever...I'm proud of you! Not many do these days. Hugs...Lovely to be a queen.
Nance Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Oh a beautiful walk in paradise, hot pulse beats starlight passion... sweet Liam. :) I enjoyed this lovely poem my friend ;)
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