Catherine Adams Poet I do not know?

Forever Isn'T As Long As It Used To Be

You softly whispered
In my ear the words            Forever

But somewhere your 
Eyes told me that                Is Not

True. So why must
My heart dissapear                 As

If it never existed.
It used to be pure                Long

Before you came into
My perfect world                   As

Polite as you could be
To win me over. But              It

Never seemd true in
The small obscure words      Used.

But I believed your
Gullable lies anyway,             To

Cover what has been in
My head shouting to              Be

Free. Faint words refused
to be heard from what           Is

A weak concious. People
Say love is real. Well, is        It?



*Note:
~*Now just read the words that are spaced out*~

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Joe Maverick May 24, 2014 at 8:38 AM Enjoyed reading your lines here Cathrine well done..'

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 18, 2009 at 12:42 PM LOVELY FORMAT XD

John Rhinem April 9, 2009 at 8:02 PM ....I really like again Your thoughts and Your message within this wonderful and heartfelt write~and hopefully many will be blessed by it!!?:):)~But it is truly too bad, that for so many, love doesn't last forever~Smile~but not all~for for some, "Their Love Is Eternal!!!":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours,' Forever, John!!!"~"Happy Easter Dear Catherine!!!":):) ~

John Rhinem April 9, 2009 at 7:56 PM ....Whether some need to hear it? Say it? Believe it? Or dream about? Sadly though, it is often abused; whether intentionally or not!? Yet, as Carolyn also said, it can 'never' be said enough between friends and family members!!!:):)~Smile, I hope that life has been treating "You" wonderfully dear lady~and that "Your Good Friday & Easter Sunday Will Be Blessed With Over Flowing Joys & Love!!!":):)....cont....

John Rhinem April 9, 2009 at 7:51 PM "Hello Beautiful & Precious Catherine Adams!!!":):)...."I Love You Forever"....Smile, nice write here dear lady~with a great thoughtful layout to emphasize Your message to the readers!!!:):)~And I agree with Carolyn about her feelings in regards to the word "Love!?"~Used at the drop of a hat within many relationships....cont....

Carolyn Devonshire April 9, 2009 at 6:03 PM Catherine, your message comes through loud and clear, even without your note. People who say they will love you "forever" are not always up to making such a commitment. It probably just feels good to say the word. "Love" is another overused word between men and women -- not talking about the love for friends or family, in those cases the word love can never be overused. Very good observation in this poem, and cleverly laid out!