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Forever In Your Eyes

From the very moment that I looked into your eyes, Overcome with passion and a slave to love was I. Roses reigned with Valentines; I danced beneath blue sky. Effervescent, I was floating. Sweet joy had come to me! Vows we made. The rings we gave each other symbolize Everlasting faithfulness and deep sincerity. Rich, so very rich in love, forever we would be! In the many years to come, trials we would face. Nonetheless, a love like ours time could not erase. You are more than spouse and lover; you are my best friend. On into our golden years, we’ll continue strong, United, living romance even now until the end, Recalling our first kisses when we hear our special song! Even if the world should spin away, I’ll see inside your eyes Years may steal our youth, but you will always be my prize. Eternal adoration glows inside your eyes of blue Showing me beyond this realm, my life goes on with you. July 15, 2016 For an acrostic contest judged 7/24/2016 Now used for Laura Loo's Second Place Only Contest III

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Date: 10/26/2016 5:09:00 AM
I really enjoyed this acrostic, Andrea!! :-) Congrats for having it highly placed in the 2nd Place Contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/24/2016 7:33:00 PM
Andrea, I remember this beautiful Acrostic gem, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine placement on this Premier Contest's short list. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/24/2016 5:20:00 PM
just beautiful lovely lady...when I just saw your name to this I was not surprised...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being in my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 10/22/2016 4:05:00 AM
OMG Andrea you have the poems of so many was they may be put just reading them tells me I can read just about anything in to them as this one {example} aplying Jesus in the understanding of we as Gods children He see us in His eyes forever as LIFE is see in so many ways Thank you my Sister for this wonderful and beautiful picture you have painted for my heart God's blessings
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Date: 8/4/2016 2:37:00 AM
So romantic ! Excellent one Andrea :)
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:37:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/26/2016 10:07:00 AM
Great choice of words..Loved the last stanza..!
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:58:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:28:00 PM
Lovely piece, Andrea, heartfelt and very worthy. Congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:58:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your Second Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:35:00 PM
Andrea, very beautiful and you carried a perfect flow with this one lady, congrats on your fine placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:24:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:03:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This is a timeless love story. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I was sooo romantic. Congratulations on your 2 nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:54:00 AM
Oh this is the craze in falling in love. great choice of words Andrea...for some reason I felt a block writing on this theme...may be very tired. I tried twice and could not complete it. But I enjoyed the winners write very much and this one. Congrats Sunita.
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:43:00 AM
Was just what I was looking for, romantic full of devotion, just wonderful! Thanks Andrea for a beautiful entry, congrats on 2nd place!
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Date: 7/23/2016 9:40:00 PM
Hi Andrea, this is a beautiful acrostic written with such sensitive and wonderful words. This poem sings its way right into the heart and one does find peace as one reads through the piece. Love shines through this piece. I Love the content and the well written way you have put the piece together. Love can and should always be the love you write of Andrea. An excelletn write. Hugs....Mike. XX. This has to be a seven Andrea.
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Date: 7/19/2016 7:07:00 AM
Beautiful words for a lifelong friend and lover. ...Fran
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Date: 7/17/2016 5:03:00 PM
And long may your life go on. with poetry so sincere loyal and true...
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Date: 7/17/2016 4:49:00 PM
Just to say, I came by to read this again! very touching!
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Date: 7/17/2016 9:45:00 AM
Beautifully written and so romantic, Andrea. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:12:00 PM
A beautiful piece my friend. Will try and give you a note this next week . A week off babysitting. love phyl
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Date: 7/16/2016 7:43:00 AM
This so touched my heart. Such a precious gift to each have that special find in the other, and to have the presence of mind to hold on come what may. Pure beauty!
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:54:00 AM
- A lucky husband ..... romantic written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:16:00 AM
This is so lovely, Andrea:) Your husband would love it:)
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:26:00 AM
Beautiful romance lovely poem xxxxx
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