Forever In Your Eyes

Forever In Your Eyes Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

Fever began the moment you touched my spirit
Our own destiny remains so sacred I can hear it
Rendezvous brought by tender vows so easily spoken
Eternal gratitude is embraced and completely awoken
Vermont we married along the misty sea side shore
Everything romantic; for it’s you, my love, I adore
Reveries speak volumes as we touch with desire

Integrated with compassion, for you light my fire
Nicholas, my beloved, it’s always you I’ve longed for

Your essence fills my adoration so let’s close the door
Oblivious to noisy streets your eyes gape into mine
Understanding our depth as we pour a glass of wine
Relentlessly we thirst for profound words to express

Everything intense in sheer love expecting nothing less
Yearning beyond comprehension our souls unite eternally
Evermore we dance and laugh brought forth internally
Seen only in your eyesight our devotion stricken incurably 


Date Written: July 10, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/27/2016 5:55:00 PM
Laura, back to congratulate you in the contest. Thank you so very much for the congratulations on my poem “Forever In Your Eyes”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:00:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:39:00 PM
Nicholas is a lucky guy. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:59:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your Second Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 12:19:00 PM
I knew you would do well, and you didn't disappoint!Congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 7/24/2016 2:23:00 PM
thank you John! I enjoy all your contests :)-luloo
Date: 7/24/2016 10:08:00 AM
Hi Laura, I enjoyed this romantic write. Congratulations on your winning write.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:12:00 AM
Excellent Composition on wonderful rhyming. Congrats Laura. Hugs
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:07:00 AM
Excellent composition on wonderful rhyming. Congrats S.O.
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Date: 7/20/2016 12:59:00 AM
A lovely rhyming acrostic:)
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Date: 7/25/2016 9:30:00 AM
thank you dear Jo :)-luloo
Date: 7/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
Laura, great acrostic good luck in the contest. Hugs sweet friend
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Date: 7/12/2016 5:11:00 PM
many thanks lovely Eve :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 5:43:00 PM
Congrats Laura. So lucky you are to enjoy these emotions. Best wishes for contest
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Anisha:)-luloo
Date: 7/10/2016 7:04:00 PM
beautiful romantic rhyming acrostic LuLoo you have penned a winner here:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:39:00 PM
many thanks lovely Jan :)-luloo
Date: 7/10/2016 5:36:00 PM
gosh, you were right on top of THIS contest and you did fantastic with it, Laura!! Sure to be a winner.by the way, you might not hear from me for a few more days. That is why I am trying to get all caught up here before tomorrow and I hope I can read many more of your poems later this week!
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:38:00 PM
thanks Andrea :) Yeah I LOVE rhyming acrostics so I had the inspiration to rite it as soon as I saw it posted. Enjoy the next few days lady :)-luloo
Date: 7/10/2016 2:43:00 PM
- Your line is like music .... beautiful and romantic, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:37:00 PM
many thanks Anne-Lise :)-luloo
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