Forever In Your Eyes

Forever In Your Eyes Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

Fever began the moment you touched my spirit
Our own destiny remains so sacred I can hear it
Rendezvous brought by tender vows so easily spoken
Eternal gratitude is embraced and completely awoken
Vermont we married along the misty sea side shore
Everything romantic; for it’s you, my love, I adore
Reveries speak volumes as we touch with desire

Integrated with compassion, for you light my fire
Nicholas, my beloved, it’s always you I’ve longed for

Your essence fills my adoration so let’s close the door
Oblivious to noisy streets your eyes gape into mine
Understanding our depth as we pour a glass of wine
Relentlessly we thirst for profound words to express

Everything intense in sheer love expecting nothing less
Yearning beyond comprehension our souls unite eternally
Evermore we dance and laugh brought forth internally
Seen only in your eyesight our devotion stricken incurably 


Date Written: July 10, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Laura, back to congratulate you in the contest. Thank you so very much for the congratulations on my poem “Forever In Your Eyes”. Hugs Eve
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July 25, 2016 at 5:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Nicholas is a lucky guy. Congrats! Viv x
Haight Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Laura, congratulations on your Second Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:19 PM
I knew you would do well, and you didn't disappoint!Congrats on a fine placement!
Scars Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 2:23 PM
thank you John! I enjoy all your contests :)-luloo
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Hi Laura, I enjoyed this romantic write. Congratulations on your winning write.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Dutta Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Excellent Composition on wonderful rhyming. Congrats Laura. Hugs
Dutta Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Excellent composition on wonderful rhyming. Congrats S.O.
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 12:59 AM
A lovely rhyming acrostic:)
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 9:30 AM
thank you dear Jo :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Laura, great acrostic good luck in the contest. Hugs sweet friend
Scars Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 5:11 PM
many thanks lovely Eve :)-luloo
Dutta Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Congrats Laura. So lucky you are to enjoy these emotions. Best wishes for contest
Scars Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Thank you Anisha:)-luloo
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 7:04 PM
beautiful romantic rhyming acrostic LuLoo you have penned a winner here:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:39 PM
many thanks lovely Jan :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 5:36 PM
gosh, you were right on top of THIS contest and you did fantastic with it, Laura!! Sure to be a winner.by the way, you might not hear from me for a few more days. That is why I am trying to get all caught up here before tomorrow and I hope I can read many more of your poems later this week!
Scars Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:38 PM
thanks Andrea :) Yeah I LOVE rhyming acrostics so I had the inspiration to rite it as soon as I saw it posted. Enjoy the next few days lady :)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 2:43 PM
- Your line is like music .... beautiful and romantic, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:37 PM
many thanks Anne-Lise :)-luloo
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