Forever In Love

Forever in love





First rendezvous, much later in life,
as if I was closer to an unending wait,
My first love and I was his wedded wife,
now silver brightly shining in my plait ....

Blush on cheeks and sparkle in eyes,
I am young when back into memories,
Smile on face to the wrinkles defied,
Forever in love, my soulful reveries ....

Embers lay deep with frozen wings,
those giggles that were ripped apart,
Some revived notes at heart strings,
now songs of an utmost caring heart ....

Aura of new sunrise, subtle melody awaits
lovely twilight hues as I colour my plaits.





Written Feb 11th, 2016
For contest- our year in love
Sponsor- Olive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 11:40 PM
One ages gracefully, when our hearts are young and can reminisce our childhood days with gladness. "Forever in love, my soul reveries" ... may you keep this mindset with you always. Beautifully expressed.
Gupta Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Photographical wordsmithy...
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February 15, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Congrat. A grande amore e un grande amore...Wonderful poetry! I liked especially the aura you refers (of new sunrise) and I also remember the sense of even a poor little branch transfigured in the eyes of lovers (Sthendal) or the meaning of Walter Benjamin and Adorno...
Boddie Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 7:16 AM
such a Beautiful selection with much retrospection from the memories' reflection of a special heart connection so true that it never needs inspection....awesome write doc....;)
Vaso Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:44 PM
This is so romantically poetic, loved it Sharma!
Canerdy Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Good sonnet, a 7-plus! Janice
Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:22 AM
This is not only a beautiful poem but ever so inspiring as well...
Lane Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:46 AM
How wonderful that your love holds fast, Upma.
Turner Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:27 AM
A lovely verse, Upma. I'm happy you have found love. May it stay fresh and keep you forever young, Good luck in contest.
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