Forever Immortal Love

Deathless and breathless you’re simply divine,
       timeless and endless, you’ve broken my chain-
  imperishable, hard to sustain,
        I’ll sketch your silhouette with some red wine-
        With passion we shall always intertwine…
 On my heart you’ve left an undying stain
   marked with immortality not in vain-
         Oh beloved, you send chills up my spine.

Perpetual love when we made our vow
       to live forever til’ our dying day-
  Everlasting compassion with much trust,
infinite adoring life will allow
       us to fulfill our promises today...
              ...to love even after we turn to dust.



February 19, 2017
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Rowe Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Poweful and so well written. Congrats on your top finish. P.S. Check out my blog about SoupMail fix
Gauthier Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 6:36 AM
Congrats on your top win, Lu Loo.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 7:49 AM
You've created a beautiful sonnet! Congrats, Luloo! I'm saving this beauty! 7
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Laura congratulations for an excellent entry...
La France Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Pett Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem Laura, Roy. :))
Parker Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Love the concept of your poem as love is eternal and glad you chose Italian Sonnet, as did I...good luck dear poet
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