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Forever Falling

Forever falling As fireflies dance amidst evergreen wishes Lighting the skies between soft stolen kisses Flittering free like the stars above shining Lost in a moonbeam our heartbeats entwining On the horizon the heavens are glowing Star dust and shimmers as romance is flowing Taking your hand while the evening is calling In love with you I am forever falling

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/28/2017 5:40:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. Oh wait a moment its been so long I'm forgetting are you Chris. Everything escapes me. My mind is mush for remembering however it is not much for remembering and recognizing poetry. Yes, this entry is lovely poetry with imagery. It also have the Chris Green signature attached. Have a wonderful morning Chris. Well done entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 6/28/2017 8:52:00 AM

Thanks so very much Lucy...I mean Lisa. :) Yes, it is I, Chris Green, writing in the twilight. :) I appreciate you my friend.

Gary Smith

Date: 6/27/2017 9:28:00 AM

A lovely poem Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/27/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Gary, I am glad you liked this one.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/26/2017 1:59:00 PM

Yes forever falling, and this kind of fall doesn't hurt at all, what a pleasure to read this Chris! Nice to see a Monday start off right with this piece!

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 3:00:00 PM

Thanks so much John for your kind thoughts.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/26/2017 9:17:00 AM

...so everyone else who reads your poem Chris! Marvelously romantic!

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 9:28:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/26/2017 8:23:00 AM

A great piece...hope your weekend went well

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim. It was ok, too much rain.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/26/2017 2:26:00 AM

Beautiful Chris, I really loved this especially the last two lines. Im going to add it to my fave list...Maria

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one so much.

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/24/2017 10:46:00 AM

a poetic verse from a true romantic

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM

Thanks so very much Frederic

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/24/2017 6:57:00 AM

Ever so beautiful, Chris! Saving!

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Kim. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/24/2017 6:48:00 AM

Chris, I really enjoyed this and it evoked such vived memories of my own.

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM

Thanks so much Mike. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Darren White

Date: 6/24/2017 5:33:00 AM

I'm forever falling with you. You know how much I love your poetry :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend, I feel the same about yours.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/23/2017 11:49:00 PM

Hi Chris, this poem is as beautiful as can be:) glad to read from your pen again:)

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Jo. I am happy you stopped by.

Sara Ella

Date: 6/23/2017 10:14:00 PM

Lovely poem :) Thank you Chris for sharing your wonderful poetry here - so good to see your poems <3

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Sara for always leaving such kind remarks on my work.

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/23/2017 8:26:00 PM

Soft and sweet. We gals misses your good mornings and good nights love poems. Lol! We did miss you friend :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you Kina, that makes me smile. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2017 7:48:00 PM

- I've missed your romantic and beautiful poems - Your Good morning poem and Good night poems, is wonderful, Chris ... I love them and always enjoy them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne-Lise. I am happy you enjoy my work so much as I so enjoy yours.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/23/2017 6:32:00 PM

Very nicely done. Wouldn't it be nice if the world were like this everyday?

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:36:00 AM

It sure would...though fortunately, some days are just like this. Thank so much Dale

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/23/2017 6:19:00 PM

I am lit up like a fire fly lol...just to read your beautiful poetry again, Chris. Seriously, this is beautiful. I love watching fireflies. This flows perfectly! :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for your wonderful comment on my poem. I always look forward to your visits.

Old Man Emu

Date: 6/23/2017 6:10:00 PM

Nicely done Chris! Poem flowed awesomely from start to finish. Enjoyed the read. Craig

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Craig, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

White Wolf

Date: 6/23/2017 6:07:00 PM

Chris, so good to read your pen again, my friend! A lovely early morning read you have delivered here! A classic ending

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:35:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend.