Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Forever Falling

Forever falling

As fireflies dance
amidst evergreen wishes
Lighting the skies
between soft stolen kisses
Flittering free
like the stars above shining
Lost in a moonbeam
our heartbeats entwining

On the horizon
the heavens are glowing
Star dust and shimmers
as romance is flowing 
Taking your hand while 
the evening is calling
In love with you I am 
forever falling

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Lisa Ricci June 28, 2017 at 5:40 AM Good Morning Chris. Oh wait a moment its been so long I'm forgetting are you Chris. Everything escapes me. My mind is mush for remembering however it is not much for remembering and recognizing poetry. Yes, this entry is lovely poetry with imagery. It also have the Chris Green signature attached. Have a wonderful morning Chris. Well done entirely. Chris Green June 28, 2017 at 8:52 AM Thanks so very much Lucy...I mean Lisa. :) Yes, it is I, Chris Green, writing in the twilight. :) I appreciate you my friend.

Gary Smith June 27, 2017 at 9:28 AM A lovely poem Chris :) Chris Green June 27, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thanks Gary, I am glad you liked this one.

John Hamilton June 26, 2017 at 1:59 PM Yes forever falling, and this kind of fall doesn't hurt at all, what a pleasure to read this Chris! Nice to see a Monday start off right with this piece! Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 3:00 PM Thanks so much John for your kind thoughts.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 26, 2017 at 9:17 AM ...so everyone else who reads your poem Chris! Marvelously romantic! Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 9:28 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Tim Smith June 26, 2017 at 8:23 AM A great piece...hope your weekend went well Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:40 AM Thanks so much Tim. It was ok, too much rain.

Maria Williams June 26, 2017 at 2:26 AM Beautiful Chris, I really loved this especially the last two lines. Im going to add it to my fave list...Maria Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:40 AM Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one so much.

Frederic Parker June 24, 2017 at 10:46 AM a poetic verse from a true romantic Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:39 AM Thanks so very much Frederic

Kim Rodrigues June 24, 2017 at 6:57 AM Ever so beautiful, Chris! Saving! Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:39 AM Thank you Kim. :)

Mike Gentile June 24, 2017 at 6:48 AM Chris, I really enjoyed this and it evoked such vived memories of my own. Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:39 AM Thanks so much Mike. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Darren White June 24, 2017 at 5:33 AM I'm forever falling with you. You know how much I love your poetry :) Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thanks so much my friend, I feel the same about yours.

Joanna Daniel June 23, 2017 at 11:49 PM Hi Chris, this poem is as beautiful as can be:) glad to read from your pen again:) Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thank you Jo. I am happy you stopped by.

Sara Ella June 23, 2017 at 10:14 PM Lovely poem :) Thank you Chris for sharing your wonderful poetry here - so good to see your poems <3 Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thank you Sara for always leaving such kind remarks on my work.

Akkina Downing June 23, 2017 at 8:26 PM Soft and sweet. We gals misses your good mornings and good nights love poems. Lol! We did miss you friend :) Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:37 AM Thank you Kina, that makes me smile. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2017 at 7:48 PM - I've missed your romantic and beautiful poems - Your Good morning poem and Good night poems, is wonderful, Chris ... I love them and always enjoy them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:37 AM Thank you so very much Anne-Lise. I am happy you enjoy my work so much as I so enjoy yours.

Dale Gregory Cozart June 23, 2017 at 6:32 PM Very nicely done. Wouldn't it be nice if the world were like this everyday? Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:36 AM It sure would...though fortunately, some days are just like this. Thank so much Dale

Heidi Sands June 23, 2017 at 6:19 PM I am lit up like a fire fly lol...just to read your beautiful poetry again, Chris. Seriously, this is beautiful. I love watching fireflies. This flows perfectly! :) Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:36 AM Thank you Heidi for your wonderful comment on my poem. I always look forward to your visits.

Old Man Emu June 23, 2017 at 6:10 PM Nicely done Chris! Poem flowed awesomely from start to finish. Enjoyed the read. Craig Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:35 AM Thank you Craig, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

White Wolf June 23, 2017 at 6:07 PM Chris, so good to read your pen again, my friend! A lovely early morning read you have delivered here! A classic ending Chris Green June 26, 2017 at 8:35 AM Thanks so very much my friend.