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Forever Falling

Forever falling

As fireflies dance
amidst evergreen wishes
Lighting the skies
between soft stolen kisses
Flittering free
like the stars above shining
Lost in a moonbeam
our heartbeats entwining

On the horizon
the heavens are glowing
Star dust and shimmers
as romance is flowing 
Taking your hand while 
the evening is calling
In love with you I am 
forever falling

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2017

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Lisa Ricci Date: 6/28/2017 5:40:00 AM Good Morning Chris. Oh wait a moment its been so long I'm forgetting are you Chris. Everything escapes me. My mind is mush for remembering however it is not much for remembering and recognizing poetry. Yes, this entry is lovely poetry with imagery. It also have the Chris Green signature attached. Have a wonderful morning Chris. Well done entirely. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/28/2017 8:52:00 AM Thanks so very much Lucy...I mean Lisa. :) Yes, it is I, Chris Green, writing in the twilight. :) I appreciate you my friend.

Gary Smith Date: 6/27/2017 9:28:00 AM A lovely poem Chris :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/27/2017 9:42:00 AM Thanks Gary, I am glad you liked this one.

John Hamilton Date: 6/26/2017 1:59:00 PM Yes forever falling, and this kind of fall doesn't hurt at all, what a pleasure to read this Chris! Nice to see a Monday start off right with this piece! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 3:00:00 PM Thanks so much John for your kind thoughts.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/26/2017 9:17:00 AM ...so everyone else who reads your poem Chris! Marvelously romantic! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 9:28:00 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Tim Smith Date: 6/26/2017 8:23:00 AM A great piece...hope your weekend went well Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:40:00 AM Thanks so much Tim. It was ok, too much rain.

Maria Williams Date: 6/26/2017 2:26:00 AM Beautiful Chris, I really loved this especially the last two lines. Im going to add it to my fave list...Maria Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:40:00 AM Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one so much.

Frederic Parker Date: 6/24/2017 10:46:00 AM a poetic verse from a true romantic Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM Thanks so very much Frederic

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/24/2017 6:57:00 AM Ever so beautiful, Chris! Saving! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM Thank you Kim. :)

Mike Gentile Date: 6/24/2017 6:48:00 AM Chris, I really enjoyed this and it evoked such vived memories of my own. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM Thanks so much Mike. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Darren White Date: 6/24/2017 5:33:00 AM I'm forever falling with you. You know how much I love your poetry :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:38:00 AM Thanks so much my friend, I feel the same about yours.

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/23/2017 11:49:00 PM Hi Chris, this poem is as beautiful as can be:) glad to read from your pen again:) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:38:00 AM Thank you Jo. I am happy you stopped by.

Sara Ella Date: 6/23/2017 10:14:00 PM Lovely poem :) Thank you Chris for sharing your wonderful poetry here - so good to see your poems <3 Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:38:00 AM Thank you Sara for always leaving such kind remarks on my work.

Akkina Downing Date: 6/23/2017 8:26:00 PM Soft and sweet. We gals misses your good mornings and good nights love poems. Lol! We did miss you friend :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:37:00 AM Thank you Kina, that makes me smile. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2017 7:48:00 PM - I've missed your romantic and beautiful poems - Your Good morning poem and Good night poems, is wonderful, Chris ... I love them and always enjoy them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:37:00 AM Thank you so very much Anne-Lise. I am happy you enjoy my work so much as I so enjoy yours.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 6/23/2017 6:32:00 PM Very nicely done. Wouldn't it be nice if the world were like this everyday? Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:36:00 AM It sure would...though fortunately, some days are just like this. Thank so much Dale

Heidi Sands Date: 6/23/2017 6:19:00 PM I am lit up like a fire fly lol...just to read your beautiful poetry again, Chris. Seriously, this is beautiful. I love watching fireflies. This flows perfectly! :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:36:00 AM Thank you Heidi for your wonderful comment on my poem. I always look forward to your visits.

Old Man Emu Date: 6/23/2017 6:10:00 PM Nicely done Chris! Poem flowed awesomely from start to finish. Enjoyed the read. Craig Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:35:00 AM Thank you Craig, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

White Wolf Date: 6/23/2017 6:07:00 PM Chris, so good to read your pen again, my friend! A lovely early morning read you have delivered here! A classic ending Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 6/26/2017 8:35:00 AM Thanks so very much my friend.