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Forever Etched In My Mind

and there she stood
innocent
so pure
so sweet
looking at me
how could i break her heart



AP: 2nd place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Brul Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 6:42 AM
how can a mom forget her child? Yes, "forever etched in mind ".
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment ~
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