Harry Horsman Poet Nonet

Forever Demands

Fate declared this life there is no time
time for us to be together,
yet surely some justice found
in this the universe,
a planned after life
where you are mine
and yes, I
become 
yours

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday March 8, 2013 at 10:19 AM A wonderful example for a very difficult form I'm happy to know, Harry! Great write, indeed! Thanks for stopping by my Questionku! It's very uplifting! Love, Hanitra

Bl Devnath March 6, 2013 at 9:54 AM Wonderful expression of passion of real love. You do nicely always. Loved always, bl

Audrey Haick March 1, 2013 at 10:51 AM It is a promise to hold in the heart, Harry...a place where time and space are absent! Great job as always. Hope all is well, my friend. Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 1, 2013 at 4:57 AM I am sure you will become one sometime harry and what a joy it will be xx

Dan Kearley February 28, 2013 at 8:47 PM So this a how a Nonet is written...Another fine write indeed. :o)

Debbie Duncan February 28, 2013 at 1:53 PM Yes, the forever afterlife, I like it ;}

Lucilla Carrillo February 28, 2013 at 9:25 AM Harry; This so nice. It is something that we all hope for. Thanks and God bless you. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2013 at 5:00 PM I think I got the title wrong. Maybe..."it's SAD (instead of hard) .....

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2013 at 4:59 PM I love this one, Harry. And it reminds me of that song: It's hard to belong to someone else when the right one comes along. Do you know it?

Sara Kendrick February 26, 2013 at 11:02 AM Ahh!! One can dream..Great romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2013 at 7:20 AM Not familiar with the style but love the poem.

Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 4:14 AM Excellent Nonnet Harry. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer February 25, 2013 at 2:57 PM nice one, harry! you've done so much with this tricky format...

Painted Hunter February 25, 2013 at 1:55 PM These are hard...yours are great

David Williams February 25, 2013 at 11:43 AM Harry stunning write here my friend....David

Eileen Manassian February 25, 2013 at 11:33 AM Harry...this is absolutely amazing. I clicked on it and send it off to my favorite poems folder! You are such a romantic soul! I wish you every happiness. Thanks for your comments on my poems. You buoy me up!

Donna Jones February 25, 2013 at 10:48 AM Seems most of us have this dream...