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Forever Bachelors Larry and Harry

Larry and Harry spend nights at a bar Neither have a job or even a car Drunken Larry burps freely Harry gropes touchy/feely That these two are unmarried is bizarre *Written May 24 for Catie's contest

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Date: 10/17/2016 6:20:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle at this, love - hope you are safe from Matthew & visiting your friend xx
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Date: 10/6/2016 11:15:00 AM
So well written...funny and bawdy...everything a limerick should be. Lots of Love Armand.
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:25:00 PM
haha, the last line clinches it!! Love that!
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:24:00 PM
carolyn, did I ever send you an email? It's gone right out of my mind, but i got your sweet little gift. What a wonderful thoughtful thing , something pink for me to wear next month. You are out of this world. Let me see your limerick now.
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:49:00 AM
Where are you.....?......?....;))
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Date: 6/4/2016 5:21:00 PM
clever write, haven't seen you around in a long time and was thinking about you, hope everything is okay... hugs
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Date: 5/31/2016 6:26:00 PM
dropped back for another read Carolyn -miss you on soup hope you will be back with us again soon:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/1/2016 12:11:00 AM
Miss your on PS! hope your well.
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Date: 4/12/2016 6:41:00 AM
So nice. A perfect 7..........with love.
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:07:00 AM
Beautiful funny poem. Loved always my lovely friend. Where are you now? please write poem for us. My favorite poetess. Loved always,bl
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Date: 11/20/2015 7:51:00 PM
haha, a cute tongue in cheek one. And a very belated congrats to you. I just saw a poem you did with Paul C. and wanted to come and see if you were still around here. Miss you. I hope you are ok . Wishing you a happy Thanksgiving. Your poem about that castle in England was beautiful.
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Date: 10/11/2015 4:21:00 PM
Hi, old friend I'm still alive.
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Date: 10/5/2015 11:57:00 AM
Carolyn, you may not remember me, but I wrote on the soup long ago. I hope all is well with you I had to stop writing when I had an accident in or 2011, as I was bedridden and did not have access to a laptop. I was listed at that time as Nonesoninlaw@hotmail.com . Since I was not writing, many of my Emails went down and I lost much of my writing. I was wondering if you knew of any way to recoup my original poems posted on the Soup. I have asked about one on the forum, but no answers. Ideas??
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:02:00 AM
Yes, odd bout those two, or is it queer. Just realized Michigan is playing Brigham Young today. That should be one helluva game. BYU is alays tough. Love, daver
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Date: 9/25/2015 5:38:00 AM
Hilarious but not bizarre in nowadays, dear Carolyn! Ha-ha! Loved it!
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:11:00 AM
Hi, Carolyn. You may not remember me, but I haven't been on a computer in several years. Since I have a new one, you may see me pop up on the Soup again. Good to see that you're still writing with style. They said that I would be on the featured group this week. I'm still having some trouble adjusting to all the new tech, but I'll be watching for your poems. Happy (belated) Birthday! Dan
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:19:00 AM
Happy Birthday Carolyn !!!! hope your day is wonderful just like you
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Date: 7/2/2015 11:35:00 PM
Cool Carolyn, Hope you are doing well , My Friend. The best to you each day in every way!!! Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/3/2015 6:45:00 AM
Excellent. Well done. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/1/2015 9:12:00 PM
I can see it now, this will be made into a movie, "When Harry met Larry"
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Date: 7/9/2015 2:43:00 PM
LOL You know, I had the same thought about the movie. I'm sorry I haven't been around lately. My sister is quite ill.
Date: 6/1/2015 1:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this humorous piece Carolyn. I hope you are feeling well.
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Date: 5/30/2015 10:22:00 AM
Great piece!
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Date: 5/27/2015 8:06:00 AM
But they do share a strange and wonderful relationship.....
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:44:00 AM
well done, sure they are out in my city on a Sat night...Seren
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:31:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on receiving Honorable Mention in Catie's L & H contest. Your limerick made me smile and caused me to ask the same question you ask in the closing line.
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