Forever, a Child

A young girl, all believe she's insane,
She feels the cool rain of spring,
Which drums the endless rhythm of her pain.

She tries, but just can't understand.
Why they stare, why they pity her.
They say you always need a helping hand.

Forever a child, that's what they'd said.
They didn't believe when she saw,
The fairies dancing on the road ahead.

They don't see the flowers come alive,
And whisper and giggle in the fields.
They don't see the lily pads when they dive,

And they call her names that hurt inside.
They say, "stupid, crazy, and retard."
Why did they laugh when she had cried?


which drums the endless rhythm of her pain- line
Revelation in the Rain by Andrea Dietrich- poem and author
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 18, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Lovely win Emily, ............ luv ~SKAT~
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September 18, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Thanks :)
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September 14, 2013 at 10:28 AM
congrats on your win with this fine poem :)
Schaffer Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Thank you!
A   Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Emily, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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September 13, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Emily xx
Mehta Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Emily
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September 13, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Exceptional piece, if you had listed your name I would have been able to give a higher ranking.
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