Forever

How do I describe the girl of my life
through valleys and streams 
as I walk through the night 
Her thoughts bring pleasures 
like a dream that is so true 
laying here awake all I do is think of you 
The smile‘s and the unity 
that bring us so close together 
never in my life will there be any other 
The strength and the bond 
that we share between us 
stronger than before 
only ourselves can defeat us 
Lessons can be learned 
in the quietest of nights 
with you by my side 
underneath this candlelight 
The feeling you get 
when the one you love is so close 
touching you from the inside
staring into your eyes I see hope 
Long life to live with feelings like this 
catching my sublime 
as I fall into a bliss  
Each day I’ll take
with a lesson learned to give 
only you as my witness 
for my soul is now lit
Forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/5/2020 11:44:00 PM
Matt, your poem is lovely, each line is dripping with love _ Constance
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Date: 1/9/2020 3:18:00 PM
I really appreciate your kind words. I have been writing since I was a kid and trying to find a place to display my work. This poem was written in 1996 with my first real love in mind. Thanks
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