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Forest On Fire

I can see the,might of forest ablaze
I can see the,Pride of mighty king on blade
I can see the,Eternal youth to be enslaved
I can see the,crown of a king on pyre
I can see the,thick canopy on fire

A day was there,When no one dares
Even the mighty light,Was not having an insight
The thick canopy,is finally enervating
the same bright light,is now shimmering

The ages have its toil,On the strength
The forest cannot,Withstand the wrath
The trunk of the trees,Have totally withered
Whether its pine or oak,Everyone has submitted

The hegemony of the eternal youth
has ceased to exists
No one is safe,Everybody is leaving
The dearest one,Who were cared the most
Are the ones Who are,in hurry to leave the host first
even the eternal love,has its own limits
no one can save forest,the way it is as it is
as if it is thous words,one has to face the fate
what he deserves

 So lets all should agree,
Let the forest burn to ashes
But is it really,
The forest that is burning
Or it is my personification
That is churning

I can see the,Luscious desires of man ablaze
I can see the,Ego of man on the blade
I can see the,Pride on youth getting enslaved
I can see the,Greeds of man on pyre
I can see the,Crown of desires on fire
I can see the,Vengeful heart on fire

Still the question is to be answered
Is it really the forest on fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/1/2024 9:31:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:02:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Avijit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 9:37:00 PM
Avijit, hope to see you back the year. happy new year
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:32:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Avijit ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2015 11:43:00 PM
Avijit, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/7/2015 11:11:00 PM
Avijit, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/7/2015 5:40:00 AM
do please read my poem A Call to Action it is very relevant to your write (written 11/12/2014) hugs
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Date: 6/7/2015 5:38:00 AM
hi Avijit and welcome to soup. A strong and deep write on a subject that concerns us all. It does not matter if it is real or just your own soul action is still needed urgently. Again a warm welcome to soup, remember to comment on other poets work and you will soon make many new friends here as they will in return comment on yours hugs 7
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