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Forest of Folly

I could hear shadows creeping from large crackling trunks, as they tilted towards solemn hills. leaves rustling with harried tongue, as a lonesome hawk stood silent vigil to night's unfolding. people seemed to drift like branches- aimlessly, upon the edges of civilization; as the moon shivered at their growing discontent, its blue skin stretched by nature's condemnation. and I trembled beneath the weight of vision, the sun spilling yellow yolk across distant horizon; breaking the shell of night, with blazing shards of realization, to be left hanging upon the twisted limbs, of man's forest of folly...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/17/2012 6:57:00 PM
Full of imagery and very well practiced talent; again good work
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Date: 11/27/2010 9:01:00 AM
Hi Bernadette.Another really wonderful poem.You have such a special way with words,Your images are so creative and your message wrapped within this piece so profound and yet clear.I love the way you write,your use of words and your creativity are excellent and make your poetry so enjoyable to read.Thank you June(Sylvia)
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:59:00 PM
really well put togther piece liked all the diffrent scenes you have described Bernadette.
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Bernadette. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:29:00 PM
Bernadette, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:43:00 AM
Bernadette, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2010 12:33:00 PM
These words were terrific a really great read I enjoyed it very much.Congrats on being featured today.Teresa
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Bernadette. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured Bernadette. Excellent use of imagery. Aloha, Connie
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