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“May all that is unlived in you blossom into a future graced with love.”

- John O'Donohue

Shinrin-yoku: Shinrin in Japanese means "forest," and yoku means "bath.' It basically means that one should spend more time with nature.

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A Sam Scott poem:
22nd October 2023
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Forest Bathing, Shinrin-Yoku

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Stretch out your arms
Lie on the mossy forest floor
Feel the cooling fronds
On your back

Be embraced.
Join the family of trees
As they chemically chatter
Beneath you. Silently.

Interlope and envelope
An exciting vibrancy 
Of Autumnal shades
Before Wintery sleep pervades

Douse your soul 
In the pine scented oil
Of calm, ancient, understanding
Bathe in the beauty

Of stillness..

(Ssshhh)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 10/24/2023 4:46:00 AM
Oh theres something absolutely magical about stillness and silence, so as i read that last line “ bathe in the beauty of stillness i couldnt help but be in awe and resonate with that, how we sometimes long for that amidst all the chaos of life. Something about nature speaks to us, and puts us in a tranquil state of mind! Your word play here is clever and very eloquent and your thoughts flow in such a meticulous rhythm, with such intricate imagery! So serene and symphonic. Loved reading this!
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Date: 10/24/2023 7:48:00 AM
Dear Ink - you always lift my spirits with your kind words! This is the first time anything I have written has been described as symphonic :) We all need peace and stillness sometimes - even the extroverts. I'm glad you loved it :))
Date: 10/23/2023 6:30:00 PM
Enjoyed this unique poem - bathing in the forest.
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Date: 10/23/2023 9:52:00 PM
Hi Kim.. thank you and so glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 10/23/2023 12:20:00 PM
Sam, your words have been meticulously woven together, capturing the essence of a profound emotional state. Your writing evokes a sense of tranquility, as a serene heart remains unshaken amidst the chaos and turmoil of the world. The elegant composition of your piece truly showcases your talent, dear Sam.
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Date: 10/23/2023 1:58:00 PM
Sotto, thank you friend. I hope it is an encouragement to reconnect with nature :)
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