Foreshadow

A deep feeling of foreboding I dreamt the world exploding, The most restless of minds The most misery always finds, Who amongst us can endure Or escape the devil’s lure… Unless the Providence’s benevolent hand, commanding the sea and land, makes us our fortunes understand and dire fate to withstand. ~03/31/19 ~Contest: 10 Lines, 5 words Rhyme III ~Sponsor: Lu Loo

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Lu Loo

Date: 4/10/2019 5:28:00 AM

great poem Abdul I loved it...thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2019 1:57:00 PM

I am glad I changed my theme , Abdul. Seeing yours inspired me to do that, and I am glad to see yours on the winner list. It well deserves to be on it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2019 3:25:00 PM

you did so well with this form. I wrote one which is not very deep. gosh, I hope I can think of a better theme to try, as you did here!

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/4/2019 1:15:00 PM

Glad you liked it. Thanks Andrea.