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'...the burnt-out end of smoky days'



                    T.S. Eliot


 

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The evening rumbles in 

and grumbles, tea is served, the kettle

whistles, bread 

is buttered, weary workers settle,

nibble, drink their tea and chatter,

as the platter's 

passed around and cakes are proffered

in the cozy parlor, lamp-lit,

rum is offered,

daily bread, and thankful for it.

Curtains closed against the weather,

children say their prayers together,

snug and safe now, sister, brother.



 



 

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The morning sun prods sleepyheads

to service and to play,

the colliery beckons

and the women make the beds.

The cobbled backstreets glisten

from the rain the night before.

The siren calls

and all the miners listen,

they heed the strident roar

and pull on their coveralls.



 



 

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You take fresh linens from the chest,

it's time to straighten up the nest,

then gargle, and repair your face

to meet the challenges and woes,

you hold your children to your breast

and wonder how by heaven's grace

you'll pay the rent, afford the food,

as praying to the Lord you stand and shiver,

arms and legs are shaking, all a'quiver,

a dreadful vision haunts your eyes,

the poor house, shameful to conceive,

you lie upon the bed and weep,

how will you cope, how will you sleep?

no items left to compromise,

a constant struggle to believe.



 



 



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He wrestles with his conscience, tried

and troubled, thoughts of fraud and theft

beset him constantly, he's torn,

his sickened heart is worn, bereft.

He looks into the eyes of strangers,

each consumed with his own fears,

distraught, and never satisfied,

into a world of want, stillborn,

condemned to worry all these years.



 

I suffer with these souls who wander

through a life of toil and grief,

tread-milled with no hope of solace,

no expectation of relief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/20/2016 4:53:00 PM
keith - this is so poignant and so magnificently written. i love the repetition of sounds that you so brilliantly play with from line to line - pure poetry! (i mean that as a high compliment...) the ending ties it all together beautifully, too.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/20/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thanks to Mr Eliot for the inspiration... and to you for such a fabulous review!!! (see? Eliot doesn't get any !!!) Bless you my dear!!! Best wishes, Keith

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