Forbidding Island

I swim to an unknown rocky strand, marooned by the captain's hand,
Up on the barren shore I stand, up on the wave-washed sand.
The sandpipers dance a saraband; could I like the birds withstand?
Held by the bars of a coral band, alone in a rocky land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 11, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Isaiah.. Congratulations in "'Rhyme Battle: Round 2 contest''...have a nice one... LUV *LINDA
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December 7, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Enjoyed the many rhymes. Congrats, Isaiah!
Michelle Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 3:53 PM
Blew me away. You deserve the win! Congratulations :) love, Juli-Michelle
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November 15, 2013 at 8:33 PM
wow, great rhyming. This is great. BG
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November 15, 2013 at 5:47 PM
very well done. I see people are doing these in styles that is so true to who they are. I can't wait to try one!!!
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