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Forbidden Nights

Forbidden nights He dreams of forbidden nights where oceans breathe sensually and timeless thoughts count down moments in sandcastle siftings… shadows carve the night, a lonely silhouette stares while distant shores weep as his dreams disappear along a thin blurred horizon faintly whispering farewell with the tide… an empty moon falls taking his hopes with it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/8/2017 8:25:00 AM
Farewell is always better than goodbye..An empty moon falls taking his hopes with it..I dont know how this line makes me feel-Helpless maybe.Very sad but beautiful..Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/8/2017 9:27:00 AM
Helpless is a good way to describe the feeling I am feeling. Thanks so much my sweet friend.
Date: 3/8/2017 6:53:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Chris Green
Date: 3/8/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much Funom, what a nice thing to say.
Date: 3/7/2017 11:49:00 PM
I am in love with this melancholic poem, I always love poems about beaches, shores, and how they can play with your feelings.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/8/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Darren. I am happy this one touched you
Date: 3/7/2017 7:31:00 PM
Such longing and desire in these lines. Beautifully written, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/8/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eileen for your nice comment.
Date: 3/7/2017 6:33:00 PM
If PS had a Poem of the Night, this one might be it!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/8/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/7/2017 5:29:00 PM
Chris, you write so much like this poet that I used to love reading. Her name is SAndy Adams but she lost contact with me at least two years ago. Always such beautiful words. Love this.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/7/2017 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much Andrea. I am happy my style brings back some fond memories for you.

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