Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Free verse

Forbidden Love

What is these furtive eyes trying to tell me….
Is it some emotion for me…could it be... first sight love…
Oh, where were you while I lived for such a long time...
Where were you while I endured those painful days...
Look I’m here, hidden in a being, in a heart hardened
might be with treachery… might be with unfaithfulness…
Where were you…where were you my love when I looked
for you in every corner of the world…like those passionate
who forget the count of time, age and place….
Could it be that you were lost inside me; in the dawn of my youth…
or is it in the secret realm of my femininity…
These furtive eyes are telling me an old story…
a story of love, so ardent,so ancient…a story counted over eras!
This magical moment makes me feel a presence….
Oh…….the presence of a heart, at last!
I can hear the ruffling of the pages of all the novels read.
I can feel, in between the lines, how you flow like cool breeze…
It tingles my dormant feelings so lazy to wake up.
A shy smile dares touch my lips which tremble
at the thought of being wiped away in jiffy!
You’ve seduced me….yes…and...
may be now you’re going to hurt me a little…..
may be now you’re going to love me a little….
But, please never desert me again….
Ultimately, you’ll reside in me, hidden in the deepest 
corner of my heart.
I’ll make sure you’re not exposed to the ruthless.
There my love, you may grow like those flowers which 
never die!


(This is the translation of one of my muse written in French that I have reviewed for this contest)
30/01/17

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Freddie Robinson Jr. June 14, 2017 at 11:48 AM A magnificent homage to love, Sunita, or who I now royally call: Lady UPD. Your sensitive pen pull the heartstrings so well, as if you know every suitor's tell. This poem has emotional depth, and articulated simplicity. Passionate poetry at its best. Much love and more love to you and yours. Sunita U.D Palawon June 14, 2017 at 12:15 PM Thanks for the so deep and encouraging words my friend. It is indeed an inspiration. God bless you :)

Pandita Sietesantos February 7, 2017 at 11:06 AM What an exhibition of superlative talent! You just know how to say it and show it! Excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Pandita Sunita U.D Palawon February 7, 2017 at 11:33 AM Thanks so much Pandita for the warm words and the your kind visit. :)

James Inman February 5, 2017 at 2:50 AM "may be now you’re going to hurt me a little….. may be now you’re going to love me a little…." Love defined in these two lines. A wonderful write. Sunita U.D Palawon February 5, 2017 at 4:50 AM I'm so glad you read and appreciate those lines.You get it right! Love is described in so many ways. Enjoyed your poems. Thanks :)

Afzal Nusker February 3, 2017 at 10:59 PM Absolutely amazing and a very deep poem, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon February 4, 2017 at 2:44 AM I'm glad you appreciate. Your words are enlightening. Thanks Afzal. :)

Joseph May February 1, 2017 at 10:35 AM Beautifully written Sunita.. Capturing the emotions of furtive hearts..A7 Sunita U.D Palawon February 2, 2017 at 7:39 AM Thanks for your positive criticism and generous rating. I'm touched. Good luck. :)

Supraja Kannan January 31, 2017 at 10:21 PM Great emotional write sunita... Brilliantly done... A 7 for this deep write... Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 10:59 PM Thanks for the encouraging words and the high rating! All the best.:) Sunita

Eileen Manassian January 30, 2017 at 11:15 PM I loved the ardent passion and love that flowed in your lines. Dreamy... Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 10:05 AM Thanks Eileen...it's written from the heart! :D Thanks for you like it.:)

Daniel Turner January 30, 2017 at 4:02 PM It should never be wrong to love. People change as do their surroundings. Brilliant write, Sunita:) Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 10:02 AM Yes you're right...but at time luck does smile on everyone where ever we are..thanks for the nice comment.G.Luck! :)

Tim Smith January 30, 2017 at 12:28 PM Beautiful poem my friend Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thanks for giving me your time for reading and appreciating it.G.Luck to you! :)