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July 21, 2023

Forbidden Fruit

~ Mortality ordained ~

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Kim Rodrigues

July 24, 2023 at 9:51 AM

Congratulations!

Alexis Y.

July 22, 2023 at 10:53 AM

WoW! Lin, You say much in a few words.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

July 22, 2023 at 8:16 AM

short and sweet Lin! hugs jan xx

Bill Baker

July 21, 2023 at 9:52 PM

Powerful Elegy, Lin, and nice illustration above. Message received. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane

July 22, 2023 at 3:12 AM

Morning, Bill. Thanks for the comment and your smile.

David Kavanagh

July 21, 2023 at 3:07 PM

Boy that apple looks good Lin, temptation personified, I wonder if most people are like me and keep their eyes on the apple when eating it, cheers David

Lin Lane

July 21, 2023 at 6:28 PM

I’ve never checked out an apple while eating but that’s a good idea. The thought of biting into a worm is not appetizing. Thanks, David.

Paula Goldsmith

July 21, 2023 at 2:16 PM

A creative/short write. I enjoyed it and love your picture. I also did this one. Really makes one think about each word. Good Luck... Have a blessed weekend.....................

Lin Lane

July 21, 2023 at 6:25 PM

I’m delighted you enjoyed it, Paula. Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

July 21, 2023 at 1:25 PM

Wow! Very good, Lin!

Lin Lane

July 21, 2023 at 6:25 PM

Thanks a lot, Kim.

Chris Green

July 21, 2023 at 9:09 AM

I'd call that shirt for sure. : ) Best wishes in the contest

Lin Lane

July 21, 2023 at 9:52 AM

I read you. I do it ofen.

Chris Green

July 21, 2023 at 9:35 AM

And I just noticed I wrote "shirt poem" . That'll teach me to check before exiting.

Lin Lane

July 21, 2023 at 9:21 AM

Mornin' Chris. Mighty good to see ya and thanks for the right nice comment. I'm much obliged for your best wishes. Ok, enough drawl... I hope you're well and happy.

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