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gypsy fruit spilling across crimson lips strained through stockings; captured freedom imprisoned we walked today, you were not there as time slapped the second hand; restricting the reality of speech held by your breath tightly formed by my arm all the while words fell on the pavement; smashing the forbidden cracks distance becoming the ashen- faced- spider stealing sleep; onyx eyes melancholy wisps of wine fixed directly upon the cynical curse without Parenthesis

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Date: 5/19/2010 4:24:00 PM
Vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in an interesting way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:01:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 2:18:00 PM
NICE WRITE, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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Date: 5/16/2010 2:18:00 PM
NICE WRITE, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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