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For Your Love I'M Breathless-

The aroma of your present
The beauty of your essence
Secures my steps
Woman you got me breathless

I confess that I adore you
I really really really love you
From your spirit first to your soul
Your vision of luminous ordainment

My visual ordinate is sparkled as a diamond 
You made me complete woman still I'm breathless

11/15/2020
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2020
From anthology " JUST JESUS "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/19/2020 12:58:00 AM
beautiful loving poem penned/// and I say- For your love still I am young!- why not!
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Date: 11/15/2020 10:55:00 AM
OMG, how romantic is this... So sweet and beautiful! True love you have for her, James :)
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 11/16/2020 6:04:00 PM
Ever so thanks Akkina, alas unfortunately there is no girlfriend or wife or love in my life right now this verse was totally of creative premise work only. Bless U in all U do Write On

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