For Wanda

For Wanda

Deep in the crannies and the nooks,
where no one goes and no one looks,
The whispers of a scattered mind,
call out to shadows left behind.

Like strobes, the memories flash and wane,
then wash away like April rain.
And thoughts that once were clear, refreshed,
sit trapped and tangled and enmeshed
in webs of darkened yesterdays,
with no tomorrows or todays.
Time flickers in the here and now,
it's all that fate chose to allow.

Behind the silences and tears,
Behind the hopelessness and fears,
Within your soul, beyond my view
Your light still glows; you are still you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/27/2018 10:23:00 PM
You grabbed my interest and kept me intrigued all the way through. The last two lines are full of optimism and hope. Happy Holidays my friend. Nice One!
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Marylou Bondi
Date: 12/28/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement. Wishing you the best of health and happiness throughout the New Year.
Date: 12/27/2018 12:20:00 PM
A lovely piece, Mary. I like the rhyme flow. Maybe you review use of 'the' & 'and' to tighten up overall flow. ...Like strobes, memories flash and wane; wash away like April rain.
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Date: 12/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you for your suggestion...I do tend to use words like 'the' and 'and' to excess. I appreciate your kindness. All the best for a very Happy New Year!
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